Message From Heaven
3-5-3 Entry10 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Well, I honestly think that in such a small form I would have a hard time trying to top this one--very evocative. Sweetly so. Who hasn't felt that serenity when gazing at such majestic splendour? Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018
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Well, I honestly think that in such a small form I would have a hard time trying to top this one--very evocative. Sweetly so. Who hasn't felt that serenity when gazing at such majestic splendour? Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for your wonderful review and encouraging comments, Dawn -- so very much appreciated on this dreary day around here. :) ;) Seems like all it knows how to do recently here is rain, be overcast and cold. Ugh! :) Hope things are brighter up your way - you and Miss Priss have a great weekend! :) ) Yvette
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a very pretty and heartfelt message to convey in this little 3-5-3 about air. I loved the photo and your word choices. Good luck to you in the contest. Hope you do well.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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What a very pretty and heartfelt message to convey in this little 3-5-3 about air. I loved the photo and your word choices. Good luck to you in the contest. Hope you do well.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for the read and review, Cindy! :) Have a great evening! :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the breezes from the mountain tops that bring us an important message from heaven, the angel's come to bring us kisses and peace.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the breezes from the mountain tops that bring us an important message from heaven, the angel's come to bring us kisses and peace.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for the read and review, Sandra -- much appreciated! :) :) Enjoy the gentles breezes that whisper to you today! :) :)
Comment from rama devi
Lovely and serene, and the medley of S sounds accentuates the sense of hush and soothing calm. Well done! Lovely presentation. Fine consonance of L, P and M as well. Superb word economy. No nits. A strong contender for my vote in this contest. Bravo.
Warmly,
rd
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Lovely and serene, and the medley of S sounds accentuates the sense of hush and soothing calm. Well done! Lovely presentation. Fine consonance of L, P and M as well. Superb word economy. No nits. A strong contender for my vote in this contest. Bravo.
Warmly,
rd
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for the read and review, rd -- much appreciated! :) :) Enjoy the gentles breezes that whisper to you today! :) :)
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You too! :-))))
Comment from Kelly Hanna
This poem gives a peaceful feeling to the reader. I enjoyed tsar the one was about heavens kiss coming from a mountain top, and blowing a whisper of peace. It brings a nice feeling. You did a great job on this short write. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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This poem gives a peaceful feeling to the reader. I enjoyed tsar the one was about heavens kiss coming from a mountain top, and blowing a whisper of peace. It brings a nice feeling. You did a great job on this short write. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for the read and review, Kelly-- much appreciated! :) :) Enjoy the gentles breezes that whisper to you today! :) :)
Comment from Anntonette
I like how each line has it's own section. The lines are organized and in good shape. The idea of Angel's whispering peace is beautiful over the mountain tops. Thank you for sharing!
- Anntonette J
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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I like how each line has it's own section. The lines are organized and in good shape. The idea of Angel's whispering peace is beautiful over the mountain tops. Thank you for sharing!
- Anntonette J
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for the read and review, Anntonette -- much appreciated! :) :) Enjoy the gentles breezes that whisper to you today! :) :)
Comment from Donka Kristeva
A message from heaven a message of peace in a Season when we expect divine visitations and words of comfort. This writer is such a message, pure, uplifting. The art work and the poem "tap" into the unseen but the very real.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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A message from heaven a message of peace in a Season when we expect divine visitations and words of comfort. This writer is such a message, pure, uplifting. The art work and the poem "tap" into the unseen but the very real.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for the read and review, Donka -- much appreciated! :) :) Enjoy the gentles breezes that whisper to you today! :) :)
Comment from LIJ Red
New Zealand? I thought that might be Matterhorn, the shady north face where the climbers fell and fell and fell. I believe you did well on the three/five/three poem.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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New Zealand? I thought that might be Matterhorn, the shady north face where the climbers fell and fell and fell. I believe you did well on the three/five/three poem.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for the read and review, LlJ -- much appreciated! :) :) Enjoy the gentles breezes that whisper to you today! :) :)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Each of your eleven syllables is effectively employed
in this delightful piece. Angels, referred to as "ministering
spirits" in the Bible, would certainly be agents of peace.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Each of your eleven syllables is effectively employed
in this delightful piece. Angels, referred to as "ministering
spirits" in the Bible, would certainly be agents of peace.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for the read and review, Janice -- much appreciated! :) :) Enjoy the gentles breezes that whisper to you today! :) :)
Comment from jmshumate
This is a nice 3/5/3 poem. I like how you make the ability between an angels kiss and snow blowing from the mountain top. Your artwork selection and words illustrate this nicley. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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This is a nice 3/5/3 poem. I like how you make the ability between an angels kiss and snow blowing from the mountain top. Your artwork selection and words illustrate this nicley. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for the read and review, jm -- much appreciated! :) :) Enjoy the gentles breezes that whisper to you today! :) :)
