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WWII Veteran Speech

A speech I gave at a recognition dinner

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Comment from LilyJR
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Enjoyed this a lot, Earl, and agree with much of what you said. I am interested to learn of your interest in military fiction and plan to read more of your posted works.
Curious: did you see the recent film, "They Shall Not Grow Old," directed by Peter Jackson? He restored, colorized, and provided sound to 100-year-old WW I footage from the Imperial War Museum to create a film that brings the men to vivid life. An unforgettable experience.

Thank you again for your poem.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
    I haven't seen the film but I've heard good things about it. I appreciate you going back in the archives to read and review my work.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
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This was one of the most beautiful pieces I have read in a long time.
My father-in-law, a WWII vet, died last Christmas at the age of 92. One of my fondest memories is sitting with him and listening to him tell about his service to our country. He loved talking about China. We would have these discussions every other weekend, and he would be so grateful that I would ask him to tell his stories again, over and over.
You have written an excellent speech in honor of our vets! Much love to you and appreciation. This is deserving of 6-stars :)
Gale

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
    Thank you very much. I appreciate the six star rating and you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from kahpot
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Excellent, this speech would have gone across wonderfully, the humor at the begging combined with your notes is very well presented, and I agree we should (I definitely do not) not laugh or abuse anyone who has fought for us, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
    Thank you kahpot, it did go over well. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from beizanten
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An interesting and funny picture that make people want to read the story. A very interesting speech, I am clapping at the end. You have done well. I wish you best of luck with the contest

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
    I first saw that picture on Facebook and thought it was the best representation of the WWII generation around. I appreciate your kind words and you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written heartfelt true story about WWII story. The ones who made it back from war have many stories to tell about the war and carry heavily on the invisible scars they received.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
    Thank you Sandra. This was truly from the heart and an honor to do. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from apky
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I simply wish I had a six left for this piece.
Brilliant.

My suggestions are below. Wish you all the best with the contest.

While the term greatest generation may have been coined by Tom Brokaw to market books, (delete-but) no truer words have ever been spoken.

battlefields no one had heard of, let alone (add-could) find on a map.

I actually interviewed all the men named plus one who had been a guard at Nuremburg(Nuremberg)

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
    Thank you for your suggestions, I have made the corrections. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from LaFrance
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Your speech was a poignant message and reminder how important our veterans are to our country's welfare, and how they left a legacy of honor and strength we should follow.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
    Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you honoring me with a six star rating.
Comment from Sugarray77
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I love this speech and am so glad you shared it with us. It is inspiring to read your comments about each person you had interviewed. So well done!

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
    Thank you, it was an honor to do it. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Bill Schott
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The American story has been defined by struggle and coming together as a society. You were able to capture quickly-diminishing tales and views from special folks. Neat.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
    Thank you very much for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from LIJ Red
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Dad and several uncles were WWII vets, and my mentor at work was one really badass troop, all the way across the Pacific with yanks or Aussies as needed, with a radio...excellent speech

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
    Thank you very much for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.