Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem, Mystery Author. It has a great beat with lines that flow smoothly with great rhymes, too. I could envision a big smile from you as you wrote this. Great picture, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018

I did have a smile when I wrote it Jan. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work.

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

This is a great little entry for the what makes one happy contest. I love the sunny days more so when there is a beach.

Great job and Good luck.

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018

Thanks Tia. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.

Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

I really, really enjoyed this because I'm a sun person. I'll even take it with 90 degrees and high humidity. I do not like cold, and gray skies will bring me down.
This was a well written poem, and I could feel your happiness all through it (as long as the sun was shining).
Love your rhyme :)
Perfect artwork.
I wish you the very best in the contest!

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018

Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A fun little rhymed poem to make us all happy. I am a sun lover too and this winter season has already gone on too long. I'm happy to go to Florida anytime. (smile)

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018

Thank you Janet. The winter had been too long for me the first week of November. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.

Comment from TPAC

Exceptional

Beautiful conveyance, well structured line composition, compelling views defined captivating, yielding one possible suggest: The sun will make me jump happy Jack. My opinion of this work.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018

Thank you for honoring me with a six star rating. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a bound fun write and bringing a little sunshine into your life is just what you need to make you happy, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018

Thanks Dolly. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about the things that make the poet happy, the sunshine is the ultimate mood lifter but too much sun can also bring damages to the skin and can make us sick when it is too hot.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018

But I tend to look at the glass as half full. Thanks for taking the time to read and review my work.

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

Haha ... I couldn't help but laugh, because your sentiments are exactly what I'm feeling right now. I'm really longing to be a snowbird and head south for the winter. "You can keep Canada I'll go to Florida" ... you said it! :)))

This is a fun poem, and I agree with you 100%. The sunshine and warmth do wonders for a person and makes them happy. "and make it snappy" ... my fave line. Best wishes for the contest with this gem of a poem. Well done!

Cheers,
Connie

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018

Thank you Connie. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.

reply by bichonfrisegirl on 11-Dec-2018

You're most welcome. :)

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Be kind?
But of course, Anonymous Poet. I'm always kind..."kind of stoopid", heh-heh.
Your poem is anything but stupid, however.
It's pretty well written.
Since you seem to need the sun in order to feel happiness, perhaps you suffer from what's known as S.A.D., or Seasonal Affect Disorder.
Those are people who need the kind (there's that word again) of vitamin D that only the sun provides in order for their bodies to feel chemically balanced.
Hey, ya' never know--stranger things have happened...

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018

Funny you should mention it, I do suffer from SAD. And i live in NW PA where we dont see the sun from October to March. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.

reply by Dean Kuch on 11-Dec-2018

My ex-wife suffered from the same thing.
There are lamps you can buy that simulate the rays of the sun in order to get you out of your seasonal funk.
I bought her one and they really seem to work.
All my best, happy horrordays holidays.
~Dean

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks the poet feels happy only on sunny days, as he hates rain and snow, he will feel happy at sun and sunny days ever; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018

Thank you for reading and reviewing my work.