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The Serpent Recoils

When a serpent doesn't strike.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Sugarray77
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is an intense ongoing tale that is spotlighted here in a Flash. You have done a good job sending out a hook to all of us to find the previous entry. Very clever!

Good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
    It's a character and storyline I'm working on, and some of the writing prompts allow me to expand what I do know about him and it. I thank you so very much for the rating and the review.
Comment from Miranda Langston
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

this is truly an excellent flash fiction and well deserving of a six star review. this is so moving, how someone hired to kill can show the better half of himself, what most people call humanity

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
    Thank you so very much. I am gratified by the six stars and the wonderfully kind review.
Comment from Insider98
Excellent
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Very good. Even a hitman doesn't cross some lines. It's a really interesting piece. I wish you good luck in the contest. Cheers!!!
Insider98

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
    Thank you! I am much encouraged by the generous and your review.