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I Remember

A Triolet

8 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This triolet, I Remember, has the proper format and recalls a moment in time when bonding was the effort-filled catching of elusive trout with the greatest guy in the world.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018

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    Thank you so much for dropping by to read and share your insightful feedback!
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is a very nicely composed Triolet, illustrated well. I remember fishing with my dad, too. Good memories. Form and flow are excellent. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written triolet about the wonderfule memories we have about the activities we did with a parent when we were children. It sure is something that will be in our hearts forever.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018

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    Thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate the positive feedback.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks in remembrance how the poet being a young lad enjoyed fishing with dad and hooking and netting rainbow trout; well said, well done. Write More Inspire More -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018

Comment from zanya
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Golden threads of nostalgia are carefully woven into the words and stanzas of this Triolet expressing the filial and paternal love that flowed abundantly between these two people

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018

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    Thank you for reading and sharing your insightful sentiments.
Comment from Sugarray77
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Hello. You have done a phenomenal job with this fantastic Triolet creation. I would mention though, that the prompt says a Triolet is eight lines... you have sixteen... Just wondering.

Melissa

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
    I had originally 8 lines, then noticed most of the other entries went on and on and on. So, I felt like I needed to complete my story. We'll probably all be disqualified. LOL But I enjoyed writing this. Thank you for reading.
Comment from Earl Corp
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I'm becoming a triolet fan. I'm not sure I could write one or not but I'm enjoying reading the submissions. I can feel the love you felt for your dad in your words. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my efforts at a triolet!
Comment from meeshu
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I enjoyed reading this work, you have created some great images and the best memories are truly fishing with Dad. good luck in the contest..

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my efforts at a triolet!