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Patiently I Wait

A Terza Rima Entry

12 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Terza Rhima about the lover that stole your heart once, he left to fight in the war and never returns and you are still patiently waiting in your secret garden where you kissed before.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
    Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from WryWriter
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Good poetic work with aba bcb cdc dd rhyming scheme and eleven syllable count. Good flow and artwork choice. I did not care for the font. The h's looked too much like b's which made my reading stumble; however, I did enjoy the poem.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
    Thank you for taking the time to read share your insights. Sorry about the font. Appreciare your generous rating.
Comment from Sugarray77
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Hello..You have done a good job following the prompt for this contest. The Terza Rima format is new to me and I am glad to read your verse to see how it can be done well.

Well done.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2018

Comment from C. Gale Burnett
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This is so beautiful, and a perfect Terza rima. I wonder how long she will wait, not knowing if he will come back or not, or even what his reason might be for staying away so long. So much can go through my imagination by reading this lovely romantic poem.
This is a great contest entry! I wish you the very, very best. I truly enjoyed this work :)
Gale

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share your insights on my Terza Rima.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is mildly romantic and also meloncholy and I enjoyed the season's joy entwined with the grief of missing someone, your poem is heartfelt and resonating, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
    Thank you, Dolly, for stopping by to read and share your thoughts. It's difficult to make sure each line meets the 11 syllable requirement for a terza rima. Hopefully, it still made sense! Always good to hear from you.
Comment from susand3022
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Dear Author, Your Terza Rima poem, Patiently I Wait, is very well written and beautifully executed. I can name at least a thousand times I felt precicely that way as a girl! It didn't even have to be a kiss, it could have been a look at the age of fourteen! The feeling is just the same. LOL Well done.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
    Thank you for stopping by to read and share your insights on my terza rima.
Comment from way2gokevs
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A pleasure to read with the right structure a truly lovely poem. Romance comes and either stays or goes, which ever way someone is always hurt.
Thanks for sharing your romantic poem and best of luck.
Have a lovely day,
Cheers, kev

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
    Thank you for stopping by to read and share your insights on my terza rima.
Comment from Earl Corp
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This poem hits three of the four criteria I use to rate poetry. It rhymes, it makes sense, and it invokes emotions within the reader. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
    Thank you for stopping by to read and share your insights on my terza rima. Always nice to hear from you.
Comment from kahpot
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Excellent, the reader assumes that was that you never heard or seen said scoundrel again, (I was going to say gentleman) but didn't seem fitting, a wonderful poem of a sad, unknown farewell, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
    Thank you for stopping by to read and share your insights on my terza rima. Always nice to hear from you.
Comment from meeshu
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you have created some great images here, and now I have better grasp of the Terza Rima form. your writing is thoughtful and descriptive.. good luck..


 Comment Written 17-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
    Thank you for stopping by to read and share your insights on my terza rima.