Patiently I Wait
A Terza Rima Entry12 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This form has a somewhat tricky rhyming pattern, which
you have handled well. The piece is very moving, describing
the pain of waiting and heartbreak.
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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This form has a somewhat tricky rhyming pattern, which
you have handled well. The piece is very moving, describing
the pain of waiting and heartbreak.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your insights on my terza rima.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about lover's waiting for love to meet again in the garden, as they promised to meet again, now stealth heart waits patiently for the meeting; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring -- DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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This speaks about lover's waiting for love to meet again in the garden, as they promised to meet again, now stealth heart waits patiently for the meeting; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring -- DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your insights on my terza rima.
