My Furry Family
Life would be lonely without them.3 total reviews
Comment from WryWriter
This is an excellent commentary about how much animals bring joy and love into our lives. The photo is great and fits this theme perfectly. I especially liked the last line--so true! A few suggestions for you to consider:
"There is nothing more heart warming then being greeted by wagging tails (omit ,) (use "and") joyful meows after a long day out."
No need to skip spaces before punctuation marks.
I really enjoyed reading this. I am an animal lover, too. Hope to read more of your great commentaries!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018
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This is an excellent commentary about how much animals bring joy and love into our lives. The photo is great and fits this theme perfectly. I especially liked the last line--so true! A few suggestions for you to consider:
"There is nothing more heart warming then being greeted by wagging tails (omit ,) (use "and") joyful meows after a long day out."
No need to skip spaces before punctuation marks.
I really enjoyed reading this. I am an animal lover, too. Hope to read more of your great commentaries!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018
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Thank you Wrywriter for your positve input ..grammar is not my strong point.
Glad you enjoyed the read despite my wording is not very rich...but I'm improving. I started writing last July for the first time ..I never knew there were so many types of poems.
I love that pic..my father took it while Abdullah and I were "making out " [biggrin]. I still remember that Summer day like it were yesterday..It's sad that ( specially) big dogs dont live long . Adbullah made 11 years , our oldest cat nearly 19 .
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What a wonderful memory to hold dear! :)
Comment from meeshu
a wonderful story and I can appreciate your love for animals. I have had two cats and three dogs close enough that I could communicate on a 'private' level. people think I'm nuts, let 'em..
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018
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a wonderful story and I can appreciate your love for animals. I have had two cats and three dogs close enough that I could communicate on a 'private' level. people think I'm nuts, let 'em..
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018
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Ciao meeshu ! the contest is over so I can now thank you better for your lovely review.. My mamma share my love for animals , my father less ..he was always looking at the economical side ..yet he did love it when the "boys" came around him when he was gardening . He also loved taking Abdullah out for his walks.
I love bushing them and just listening to my cats purring on my lap ..such a relaxing feeling ...and they are the perrrfecct bed warmers.
I hope you have a peaceful weekend, meeshu
Ciao!
PS. I don't care what people think of me either , to hell with them ...(biggrin)
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Awe..... This is so adorable. The entire thing. First I must say the picture is so cute of you two. Awe... I really want to get a dog. ð???. I've had cats and dogs too. They are just so sweet and the loyalist of friends. They do sense when you need a hug and are there for you. I love this little story. This is an excellent entry. Good luck. ð??©Kerryð???
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Awe..... This is so adorable. The entire thing. First I must say the picture is so cute of you two. Awe... I really want to get a dog. ð???. I've had cats and dogs too. They are just so sweet and the loyalist of friends. They do sense when you need a hug and are there for you. I love this little story. This is an excellent entry. Good luck. ð??©Kerryð???
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
