Tree Nymphs
An Etheree Entry11 total reviews
Comment from PoemsOfDD
June, this is a great entry for the Etheree Poem contest contest. All syllables are in check with a fantastic presentation of these fluttering beauties. I like your reference to Tiffany glass, very effective and the conclusion of returning home on a soft breeze. Very good! Best of luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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June, this is a great entry for the Etheree Poem contest contest. All syllables are in check with a fantastic presentation of these fluttering beauties. I like your reference to Tiffany glass, very effective and the conclusion of returning home on a soft breeze. Very good! Best of luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Thank you for sharing your insights on this etheree. I do love butterflies!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a really beautiful etheree that makes effective use of all syllables
to describe these butterflies. The alliterateration and similes enhance
the overall effect of your description.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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This is a really beautiful etheree that makes effective use of all syllables
to describe these butterflies. The alliterateration and similes enhance
the overall effect of your description.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thank you for your positive feedback and insightful review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Etheree about the tree nymphs that become beautiful butterflies with colorful patterned wings that flutter up and down the trees in search of the sweetest nectar.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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A very well-written Etheree about the tree nymphs that become beautiful butterflies with colorful patterned wings that flutter up and down the trees in search of the sweetest nectar.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thank you for your positive feedback and insightful review.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
How absolutely beautiful! This is a perfect contest entry!
It seems the artwork was made just for your poem.
The poem, itself, was a perfect Etheree, painting a beautiful picture of a piece of God's wonderful creation.
Your poem made for smooth, flowing reading.
Extremely well done! I wish you the very best in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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How absolutely beautiful! This is a perfect contest entry!
It seems the artwork was made just for your poem.
The poem, itself, was a perfect Etheree, painting a beautiful picture of a piece of God's wonderful creation.
Your poem made for smooth, flowing reading.
Extremely well done! I wish you the very best in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and review!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, you can almost touch their little feather light wings ... Your description using rice paper is so unique yet so very appropriate! ;) Thank you for sharing and good luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Oh, you can almost touch their little feather light wings ... Your description using rice paper is so unique yet so very appropriate! ;) Thank you for sharing and good luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a beautiful write that soothed my senses, and your imaginative words drew a magical scene of fluttering butterflies, such joy they bring and your brought that joy to me here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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This is a beautiful write that soothed my senses, and your imaginative words drew a magical scene of fluttering butterflies, such joy they bring and your brought that joy to me here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and review!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery is vivid and
paints a good word picture.
-I like the first line, as well
as the second, with the
reference to Tiffany glass.
-You have also used alliteration
effective to enhance the imagery.
-The concluding lines are good,
and there is a peaceful mood in the poem.
-It is well written; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery is vivid and
paints a good word picture.
-I like the first line, as well
as the second, with the
reference to Tiffany glass.
-You have also used alliteration
effective to enhance the imagery.
-The concluding lines are good,
and there is a peaceful mood in the poem.
-It is well written; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and review! Your insights and generous rating are much appreciated.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from mermaids
This is one of the best butterfly poems I have read. There is a light feeling in your words that captures the image and feel of the butterfly as she flits to flower to flower. Excellent use of words.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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This is one of the best butterfly poems I have read. There is a light feeling in your words that captures the image and feel of the butterfly as she flits to flower to flower. Excellent use of words.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and review!
Comment from meeshu
you have created some great images here, and your writing is thoughtful and descriptive, I'd say it is just about perfect. I mean that. good luck..
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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you have created some great images here, and your writing is thoughtful and descriptive, I'd say it is just about perfect. I mean that. good luck..
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and review!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Beautiful, I liked this Etheree poem describes a beautiful sight enjoying how tree nymphs flirting wings, flirting and flitting all day from blossom to blossom as they sipping sweet nectar till night breezes carry them their home; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring -- DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Beautiful, I liked this Etheree poem describes a beautiful sight enjoying how tree nymphs flirting wings, flirting and flitting all day from blossom to blossom as they sipping sweet nectar till night breezes carry them their home; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring -- DR ALCREATOR
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and review!
