Bamboo Forest
A Rondel Entry8 total reviews
Comment from donette1914
very sad how these dears one are killed off
very creative and its so nice to read your well penned work
i love the artwork as it complainants your work
i hope you do well in the contest and it was a pleasure
donette1914 dec 27 2018
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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very sad how these dears one are killed off
very creative and its so nice to read your well penned work
i love the artwork as it complainants your work
i hope you do well in the contest and it was a pleasure
donette1914 dec 27 2018
Comment Written 27-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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I;m glad you enjoyed this poem on pandas.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Rondel about the little panda bears that have only interest on munching on the bamboo for lunch dinner and breakfast.
MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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A very well-written Rondel about the little panda bears that have only interest on munching on the bamboo for lunch dinner and breakfast.
MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Thank you for your kind comments.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I wish I had a 6 to give you! This moving, skillfully-written
piece appeals, making me smile, then reminds me of how
the endangered species lists are growing!
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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I wish I had a 6 to give you! This moving, skillfully-written
piece appeals, making me smile, then reminds me of how
the endangered species lists are growing!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Thank you for your encouraging and insightful sentiments.
Comment from Sugarray77
I love your entry for the Rondel poetry contest. You do a very good job describing the habitat of the panda bear and bringing up the point that it needs to be left alone. Good job.
Melissa
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I love your entry for the Rondel poetry contest. You do a very good job describing the habitat of the panda bear and bringing up the point that it needs to be left alone. Good job.
Melissa
Comment Written 25-Dec-2018
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The pandas know the trick and love eating, enjoying and living in bamboo leaves in bamboo forest as they enjoy there in partners and family; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring -- DR ALCREATOR Merry Christmas! Happy New Year!
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The pandas know the trick and love eating, enjoying and living in bamboo leaves in bamboo forest as they enjoy there in partners and family; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring -- DR ALCREATOR Merry Christmas! Happy New Year!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A cute write about these amazing little creatures and how men are still a threat to them, I wish you luck with the contest, although they look cute, they can be dangerous, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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A cute write about these amazing little creatures and how men are still a threat to them, I wish you luck with the contest, although they look cute, they can be dangerous, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Thanks, Dolly, for sharing your lovely thoughts on my rondel!
Comment from meeshu
you have created some great images of the Asian forest and your writing is thoughtful and descriptive. with a warning we need to hear..
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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you have created some great images of the Asian forest and your writing is thoughtful and descriptive. with a warning we need to hear..
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Appreciate very much your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Comment from Pantygynt
The rondel form used here in support of a conservation issue. This time it is the giant panda, another endangered species, that is in the spotlight created by this rondel. The repeated lines fit in well asnd help to stress your point.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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The rondel form used here in support of a conservation issue. This time it is the giant panda, another endangered species, that is in the spotlight created by this rondel. The repeated lines fit in well asnd help to stress your point.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Thank you for your supportive review. By the way, after I revised my last attempt at a tanka to a 5-7-5-7-7, it reached recognized status on the site. Appreciated your honest review. That's how I learn!
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Pleased to have helped it along
