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Comment from meeshu
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This is a pleasure to read. it is full of alliteration, rhythm and assonance. Your writing is smooth and the language is colorful. Very well penned, Rhonnie....................meeshu

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2018

Comment from Raul1
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Very good poem and it proves a point. I think some people will do stupid things. This is why we need to learn from our mistakes by not doing. Some do it without thinking about it first. I like your poem. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2018