Our Every Crime
Contest Entry2 total reviews
Comment from babykoala
I love the theme you have taken with this piece, in reality, if this was exactly what everyone faced, I am pretty sure that it would be the most anxiety-ridden few minutes of the whole of your life! so I find this very clever and thought-provoking.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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I love the theme you have taken with this piece, in reality, if this was exactly what everyone faced, I am pretty sure that it would be the most anxiety-ridden few minutes of the whole of your life! so I find this very clever and thought-provoking.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Baby K. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this short piece.
Comment from Pat Fleming
You have so beautifully, amazingly, perfectly, terrifyingly described my own vision of what my Judgement Day will be. "My soul lies bare", sent chills through my own soul. I wonder if that's how it will be? In so few words, you have not only created a creepy, scary, anxious feeling in me, but you've made me start to ponder again about the whole concept of Heaven and Hell. What more can you ask for from a poem? To leave your reader feeling something deeply while also leaving them with their own questions. To accomplish that in so few words, you are a truly great poet. Thank you
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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You have so beautifully, amazingly, perfectly, terrifyingly described my own vision of what my Judgement Day will be. "My soul lies bare", sent chills through my own soul. I wonder if that's how it will be? In so few words, you have not only created a creepy, scary, anxious feeling in me, but you've made me start to ponder again about the whole concept of Heaven and Hell. What more can you ask for from a poem? To leave your reader feeling something deeply while also leaving them with their own questions. To accomplish that in so few words, you are a truly great poet. Thank you
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Pat. Yes, no one here really knows but one way or another we will find out. And that will be a scary day. Just keeping faith is all we can do. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad the piece made an impact. Thank you again. Have a wonderful weekend.
