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Comment from Bill Schott
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This one-hundred-word flash fiction story, Widow Black, meets the word requirement and I hope the judges accept a poem format that is a story. over a prose write. Good luck.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
    HELLO BILL: Thank you for reviewing and commenting on my work here. You are appreciated. God bless you and yours. Cordially:fhonnie69.
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello author
I will say that your 100 flash fiction was well written and to tell you the honest truth I'm not ready even if I'm old I don't want death to visit me.
Best to you in this contest
Gert

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019
    HELLO GERT: It's me. Thank you for viewing and complementing my work here. As usual...you are appreciated. Thanx for calling me, aurthor. I like that name. Especially coming from an author. Makes me feel like a tighter writer like her. Thank you for sharing, Gert. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69. P.S,. "I'm old too. Water is old. Older than any of us. But we need it. None of us can live without it." (smile)
reply by Gert sherwood on 19-Jan-2019
    You are welcome rhonnie69
    I will try to keep reading your writings
    Gert
Comment from country ranch writer
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When you are at deaths door we fight hammer and tooth to stay alive and glad when we are able to. I love live to much to let it slip through my fingers.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
    HELLO COUNTRY RANCH WRITER: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my work here. You are appreciated. God bless. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This is a unique take on the contest prompt. It reads well, though, Rhonnie. I enjoyed reading it. You expressed your thoughts/feelings well. I like the way you formatted your lines. Good job and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
    HELLO JAN: Thank you for viewing and complementing my work here. You are appreciated. God bless. Cordially: rhonnie69.