Night
1-6-1 poetry23 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Night, has the syllables in the right place and pits the darkness against the shiny reflection of light off the snow. This guy needs a snow fence.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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This 1-6-1, Night, has the syllables in the right place and pits the darkness against the shiny reflection of light off the snow. This guy needs a snow fence.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Hi Bill. Thanks so much!!
Melissa
Comment from JennaG
I really like your 1-6-1 poem. Even without the cool picture, my mind went to a winter scene when reading your words. Those snowy nights with the wind howling seem so dark and cold, but a little light from a nearby window can make things seem warm and inviting again. This is a very clever piece! It says a lot in very few words and creates wonderful imagery. Best of luck to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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I really like your 1-6-1 poem. Even without the cool picture, my mind went to a winter scene when reading your words. Those snowy nights with the wind howling seem so dark and cold, but a little light from a nearby window can make things seem warm and inviting again. This is a very clever piece! It says a lot in very few words and creates wonderful imagery. Best of luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much Jenna!
Comment from Helena Frances
Beautiful picture that draws the reader into the verse.
I like the imagery of darkness being overcome, gently, by the white snow.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Beautiful picture that draws the reader into the verse.
I like the imagery of darkness being overcome, gently, by the white snow.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much, Helena!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Thank heavens we are not in complete darkness all the time and your 1-6-1 poem confirms that the night is eventually overcome by the morning light, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Thank heavens we are not in complete darkness all the time and your 1-6-1 poem confirms that the night is eventually overcome by the morning light, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much, Dolly!
Comment from TPAC
You struck that target, finding statement clear, given comment defining to prior fact. This write sharpness and keen wit explosive to me. All factors stated in my opinion.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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You struck that target, finding statement clear, given comment defining to prior fact. This write sharpness and keen wit explosive to me. All factors stated in my opinion.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much, TPAC!
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, Oh I liked this 1-6-1 poem very much. Your dreamy words go so well with the artwork. Your words evoke great imagery. Not easy to do in so few words. Good luck in the contest. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Hi there, Oh I liked this 1-6-1 poem very much. Your dreamy words go so well with the artwork. Your words evoke great imagery. Not easy to do in so few words. Good luck in the contest. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much, Ulla!!
All the best.
Comment from mumanoon
You did a good job on the theme and construction of this 1-6-1 poetry entry for the competition. Your subject, imagery and chosen artwork really compliment one another. Well done and good luck in the competition.
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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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You did a good job on the theme and construction of this 1-6-1 poetry entry for the competition. Your subject, imagery and chosen artwork really compliment one another. Well done and good luck in the competition.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Eight syllables...check
Poem must be formatted in a 1-6-1 line by line poem...check
Each line must rhyme...check
Subject can be about any topic...check
Superb presentation and wording that evokes expressive imagery...check, and double check.
Looks like everything checks out to me.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Eight syllables...check
Poem must be formatted in a 1-6-1 line by line poem...check
Each line must rhyme...check
Subject can be about any topic...check
Superb presentation and wording that evokes expressive imagery...check, and double check.
Looks like everything checks out to me.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Haha... I love your checklist system... you nut! Thanks for the review
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Heh-heh-heh... ;-)
Comment from Donka Kristeva
... like a mantle. That certainly stirs imagination but it is also inspiring. Light comes from heaven and may suggest the presence of angels. The art work is wonderful and mysterious.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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... like a mantle. That certainly stirs imagination but it is also inspiring. Light comes from heaven and may suggest the presence of angels. The art work is wonderful and mysterious.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Thanks Donka.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Wow! What an awesome picture. That's what my house looks like right now, we just got 3 feet of drifting snow. lol. A great entry for the 1-6-1. Good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Wow! What an awesome picture. That's what my house looks like right now, we just got 3 feet of drifting snow. lol. A great entry for the 1-6-1. Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Kerry.
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Welcome.
