Night
1-6-1 poetry23 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
Your poem has a lot of meaning, light overcoming darkness.
You have the right amount of syllables.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Your poem has a lot of meaning, light overcoming darkness.
You have the right amount of syllables.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much, I really appreciate your review and comments!!
Comment from Mark D. R.
tough to achieve such excellence in a few lines, but with only 8 syllables, very good!
Like:
your rhymes
night ... overcome
... white light
Good luck in your prompt entry
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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tough to achieve such excellence in a few lines, but with only 8 syllables, very good!
Like:
your rhymes
night ... overcome
... white light
Good luck in your prompt entry
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much, Mark.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. The one thing that is always needed in a dark night is definitely a beacon of white light shining so that we can see where we must go.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. The one thing that is always needed in a dark night is definitely a beacon of white light shining so that we can see where we must go.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much, Sandra!!
Comment from victor 66
Writing in the format of 1-6-1 isn't as easy as it looks. But, your illustration fits your poem very well. And... You have rhyme, rhythm and a flow of words that make for a very nice read. I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Writing in the format of 1-6-1 isn't as easy as it looks. But, your illustration fits your poem very well. And... You have rhyme, rhythm and a flow of words that make for a very nice read. I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of every syllable in this 1-6-1 about
the power of light over darkness. The Bible addresses the literal and
symbolic significance of light and dark.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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You have made effective use of every syllable in this 1-6-1 about
the power of light over darkness. The Bible addresses the literal and
symbolic significance of light and dark.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much, Janice.
Comment from Pantygynt
The basic requirements of this form are purely syllabic so full marks for not only being compliant in that respect but being poetic in addition with all the lines of your tercet rhyming.
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The basic requirements of this form are purely syllabic so full marks for not only being compliant in that respect but being poetic in addition with all the lines of your tercet rhyming.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much, Jim... I appreciate it.
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I think I missed the fact that three rhymes were also a requirement.
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You are right... that is ALWAYS the tricky part, Jim. Thanks a bunch.
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing. Despite the difficulty of these short forms, you have met the challenge quite admirably. I believe this is my favorite thus far. Your correct syllable count should ensure the contest criteria have been met. Your chosen illustration is appropriate. Good luck with your contest entry!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Thank you for sharing. Despite the difficulty of these short forms, you have met the challenge quite admirably. I believe this is my favorite thus far. Your correct syllable count should ensure the contest criteria have been met. Your chosen illustration is appropriate. Good luck with your contest entry!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much, I appreciate it.
Comment from The Cowboy Poet
It definitely takes a lot of planning to put short poems like this together. The form is solid and the statement it makes presents a solid theme. Very well done on a difficult form. Cowboy
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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It definitely takes a lot of planning to put short poems like this together. The form is solid and the statement it makes presents a solid theme. Very well done on a difficult form. Cowboy
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much, Cowboy!!
Comment from RodG
Lovely pairing of picture and poem. That "beacon of white light" has long symbolized HOPE or FAITH for many of us. I like the subtle way you used three rhymes in this short poem.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Lovely pairing of picture and poem. That "beacon of white light" has long symbolized HOPE or FAITH for many of us. I like the subtle way you used three rhymes in this short poem.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much, Rod.
Comment from Miss Sherry
This is so well put together. I just love your artwork...and your few words allowed are so well chosen. I see this is for a contest, so I wish you the best of luck. I will be anxious to see who the poet is...as I have an inkling in my head.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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This is so well put together. I just love your artwork...and your few words allowed are so well chosen. I see this is for a contest, so I wish you the best of luck. I will be anxious to see who the poet is...as I have an inkling in my head.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Haha, Sherry.... thank you.
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We shall see!
