Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

As a poem I get the message you're trying to convey. But I think you have it mislabeled as a satire script. As a poem it's cool and funny, a script not so much.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019

HELLO EARL: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem here. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

What a tragedy! Social culture, custom, rules and religious impact is more powerful than confession of sins (adultery) and cleanse by God; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019

HELLO ALCREATOR: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem here. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.

Comment from Tesla Crow

Good

I enjoyed the flow and succinctness of the poem. The accompanying artwork was fitting and illustrative, as well. I could do without the Biblical verses though.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019

HELLO TESLA CROW: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem here. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.

Comment from beencounter

Excellent

Your 5-7-5 poem has a really smooth flow, difficult to do with the syllable constraints. Your accompanying picture selection is right on target. I also enjoyed the Scripture citations. Keep on writing

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2019