Comment from fm wright

Excellent

A wonderful and humorous 3-5-3 poem. The picture goes beautifully with the words, so that they all flow together well. Best of wishes with this entry. It is a delightful read!

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019

Thank you so much; I am so glad you liked it.

reply by fm wright on 29-Jan-2019

I liked it very much!

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I had never thought of laundry on a line like sails and rigging on a breezy day. A very original image that you have created with only eleven syllables.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019

Thanks for reviewing. I am finding I really enjoy these brief syllable challenges.. they certainly focus the mind.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent, and good on you for trying different forms, you have done a wonderful job here, and yes we would all like to be doing something else rather than the washing, but you have made this look like fun, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

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 Comment Written 29-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019

Thanks for your good wishes and for your review. I went sailing the next day (probably when I should have stayed home and mowed the lawn).

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

this short poem is delightful. You have done a fine job with this backyard boat race. I like your author's notes too. good luck to you..

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 Comment Written 29-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019

Thanks for reviewing and for your good wishes. I do like thinking on ideas for these short poems.... hones the imagination.