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Love and Madness

A love affair doesn't always end well.

3 total reviews 
Comment from dragonpoet
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This sounds like Cassie was a little crazy herself. She pushed him away, but never thought it was her fault. She didn't seem to want to see him happy. It shows real love can change a person in good way. And obsessive love does the opposite.

I think you need a comma between trash and was in the first stanza and between
grim and filled in the second.

Good luck and keep writing

Joan

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
    Thank you dear Joan for calling my attention to the needed commas. I appreciate your careful read and review.
    Yes, love can become crazy and change people.
    Have a great day!
    Anon
reply by dragonpoet on 02-Feb-2019
    You're welcome. I'm glad I could help.

    Joan
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Needs Improvement
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The good part was that everything did rhyme. But, to me, the tone seemed rather child-like and unpolished. Plus the content is disturbing, too.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
    I tried to get a limerick style mixed with free verse. Child like? The content was anything but that. I DO appreciate an honest review Thanks for reading and I appreciate your oponion which differs from other readers.

    Have a great evening.
    Anon
Comment from CathyM
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I liked this poem a lot. It told the story of love and loss and in dare I say a sassy way. Good job I was sad for the boy in the end. You should do well with this.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
    Yes, it did end on a sad note. Thank you for reading and your supportive review.

    Have a great evening.
    Anon