Twilight
Rictameter poetry22 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Oooooo... This is such a lovely rictameter entry, my friend. I truly enjoyed it. I love the picture as well. Great job! Good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Oooooo... This is such a lovely rictameter entry, my friend. I truly enjoyed it. I love the picture as well. Great job! Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Kerry!!
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You're very welcome. I just gave you your 4th vote. Good luck!
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Thanks so much, Kerry!!
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You are awesome, Kerry.. Thank you.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I so very much love this :) The artwork was a very good choice. I especially loved, 'Winter's hand lays heavily on burdened shoulders ~ the Earth remains subdued.' This is truly a beautiful rictameter poem!
Gale
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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I so very much love this :) The artwork was a very good choice. I especially loved, 'Winter's hand lays heavily on burdened shoulders ~ the Earth remains subdued.' This is truly a beautiful rictameter poem!
Gale
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thanks for the lovely comments, Gale. I am delighted that you like it.... also, congrats, again, on winning the Love Poem contest... well deserved!!
Melissa
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Oh, Melissa ? you are truly the gifted one when it comes to writing. I truly loved your rictameter!!
Thank you for the congratulations. You are very special :)
Gale
Comment from victor 66
Yes, in many respects I do love winter. The sky, the white covering the land and trees with the sun going down, give such a different perspective than the other seasons. The air is crisp, and for some of us, it is a wonderland. Nice poem and a nice read. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Yes, in many respects I do love winter. The sky, the white covering the land and trees with the sun going down, give such a different perspective than the other seasons. The air is crisp, and for some of us, it is a wonderland. Nice poem and a nice read. Best wishes.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Victor.
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You are most welcome, Melissa.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Honestly, your illustration made me review it!
But your verse perfectly matches the same.
especially like:
'long shadows' - reinforced by picture!
'winged night creatures ..."
how you satisfied the Rictameter pattern
Best wishes for your writing prompt entry.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Honestly, your illustration made me review it!
But your verse perfectly matches the same.
especially like:
'long shadows' - reinforced by picture!
'winged night creatures ..."
how you satisfied the Rictameter pattern
Best wishes for your writing prompt entry.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much,Mark.
All the best
Comment from Miss Sherry
Gorgeous artwork!! Makes my soul sing, as does your poetry. I see this is for a contest, so I can't know who you are. I wish you the best of luck in the contest and this is a wonderful entry.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Gorgeous artwork!! Makes my soul sing, as does your poetry. I see this is for a contest, so I can't know who you are. I wish you the best of luck in the contest and this is a wonderful entry.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Sherry.
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
You have managed to capture the essence of twilight, which is a time that I really love. And you did it within the confines of a rictameter. Your picture fit your poem beautifully. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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You have managed to capture the essence of twilight, which is a time that I really love. And you did it within the confines of a rictameter. Your picture fit your poem beautifully. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Stephanie.
Comment from Christine C Autry
This was a very good poem I enjoyed Twilight. And had beautiful aren't working at to enjoyed it that alsoThank you for your work. Keep up your writing.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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This was a very good poem I enjoyed Twilight. And had beautiful aren't working at to enjoyed it that alsoThank you for your work. Keep up your writing.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Christine.
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Your Welcome.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-The imagery paints a vivid
word picture of a wintry scene.
-I like the personification with "Winter's hand."
-Good concluding lines, as well.
-This line only has 7 syllables and needs 8.
-shoulders ~ the Earth is subdued
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-The imagery paints a vivid
word picture of a wintry scene.
-I like the personification with "Winter's hand."
-Good concluding lines, as well.
-This line only has 7 syllables and needs 8.
-shoulders ~ the Earth is subdued
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Pam!! I will look at that.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Poet,
Your Rictameter is exceptionally well=crafted. What a beautiful emotive and visual picture is created with your expressive word choices. Aside from dawn, twilight is my favorite time of each day - a time to gather in, if you will...
Thank you for this lovely offering; it truly resonated with me.
Always,
diane
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Hello Mystery Poet,
Your Rictameter is exceptionally well=crafted. What a beautiful emotive and visual picture is created with your expressive word choices. Aside from dawn, twilight is my favorite time of each day - a time to gather in, if you will...
Thank you for this lovely offering; it truly resonated with me.
Always,
diane
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Diane...
Comment from Chris Davies
This is a beautiful poem, and really captures that moment of the day. I can just see the bats coming out of the eaves. Great job! I wasn't familiar with a rictameter until yesterday, but this seems an elegant example.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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This is a beautiful poem, and really captures that moment of the day. I can just see the bats coming out of the eaves. Great job! I wasn't familiar with a rictameter until yesterday, but this seems an elegant example.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Chris. It was new to me too and is in a contest... we will see.
