Twilight
Rictameter poetry22 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Rictameter poem about the twilight that is always a magical time of the day betweeb day and night when the day stops and the night begins.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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A very well-written Rictameter poem about the twilight that is always a magical time of the day betweeb day and night when the day stops and the night begins.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Sandra.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is an excellent poem--really beautiful. Your descriptions are crystal
clear, and your use of personification enhances the overall effect. One
thing: "Lays" should be "lies."
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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This is an excellent poem--really beautiful. Your descriptions are crystal
clear, and your use of personification enhances the overall effect. One
thing: "Lays" should be "lies."
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Janice. I will definitely look at that ... I appreciate your wonderful review.
Comment from Gloria ....
Beautiful artwork and excellent poetry in this Rictameter. I've never thought of winter laying its hand on the Earth's burdened shoulder, but it makes sense now that you say so.
A most enjoyable winter thought and best of luck to you in the booth. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Beautiful artwork and excellent poetry in this Rictameter. I've never thought of winter laying its hand on the Earth's burdened shoulder, but it makes sense now that you say so.
A most enjoyable winter thought and best of luck to you in the booth. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Hi Gloria. Thank you very much for the wonderful comments. When shall we get to read verses from you? I am hoping it is very soon!!!
Comment from LovnPeace
Lovely in verse and art. I once wrote a poem about the cold before the dawn. I think this is the coldest time and most calm. Well done. Blessings, Barbara
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Lovely in verse and art. I once wrote a poem about the cold before the dawn. I think this is the coldest time and most calm. Well done. Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Barbara. I agree that time of day does seem the coldes!! I appreciate you taking your time to review.
Comment from Donka Kristeva
This gives a sense of stillness and tranquility in nature and its inhabitants. Well conveyed. Winter at rest and inner peace. Lovely art work.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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This gives a sense of stillness and tranquility in nature and its inhabitants. Well conveyed. Winter at rest and inner peace. Lovely art work.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Donka!!
Comment from donette1914
what a beautiful photo!!!
As you draw ones in it becomes so believable and
your words flow smoothly
very well penned
I hope for the best with the contest
donette1914 Feb 1 2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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what a beautiful photo!!!
As you draw ones in it becomes so believable and
your words flow smoothly
very well penned
I hope for the best with the contest
donette1914 Feb 1 2018
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Donette!!
Comment from zanya
A reflection on the mystique of a winter twilight -so beautiful to read and observe Nature 'half in and half out of darkness'- a time of quietude and such a lovely pic
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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A reflection on the mystique of a winter twilight -so beautiful to read and observe Nature 'half in and half out of darkness'- a time of quietude and such a lovely pic
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much, Zanya!! I really appreciate your time you took to review!!
Comment from patcelaw
Author, I do wish I still had a six for the beautifully worded and presented rictameter. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Patricia
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Author, I do wish I still had a six for the beautifully worded and presented rictameter. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Patricia
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Hello Patricia... Thanks for the well wishes and the virtual six you gave me... I am grateful for the time you took to review.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
You've set quite the stage with this one. I like how you describe every intricate detail of the scene that you've laid out for us. I like the line "winter's hand lays heavily on burdened shoulders the earth is subdued." Very clever and thought provoking. I commend you on presenting a very well written poem. Well done!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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You've set quite the stage with this one. I like how you describe every intricate detail of the scene that you've laid out for us. I like the line "winter's hand lays heavily on burdened shoulders the earth is subdued." Very clever and thought provoking. I commend you on presenting a very well written poem. Well done!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Thank you very much, Jeffrey. I appreciate your wonderful review.
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Thank you very much, Jeffrey. I appreciate your wonderful review.
Comment from RodG
This rictameter does a marvelous job of creating and sustaining ATMOSPHERE. Bookending your poem with "Twilight" definitely helps, but mostly it's your visual imagery--e.g. the contrast of dark shadows on snowy fields and winged night creatures "moving on the edges of twilight."
Rod
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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This rictameter does a marvelous job of creating and sustaining ATMOSPHERE. Bookending your poem with "Twilight" definitely helps, but mostly it's your visual imagery--e.g. the contrast of dark shadows on snowy fields and winged night creatures "moving on the edges of twilight."
Rod
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Rod, for the wonderful comments. I am glad you liked it.
