Ida and Woody
Sometimes all it takes is a little motivation and effort.13 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
This is just adorable and perfectly metered. How creative and talented you are. I am not sure how I missed this, but I miss things sometimes. A contender and hopeful winner for the contest. Ya got my vote.
All my best,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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This is just adorable and perfectly metered. How creative and talented you are. I am not sure how I missed this, but I miss things sometimes. A contender and hopeful winner for the contest. Ya got my vote.
All my best,
Sal xo
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much, Sally. Actually I lost by a mile but, to their credit, there were some really good poems entered. As always, I really appreciate your support and encouragement.
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I thought this looked a little bit older. I could not remember seeing it. Well... I loved it.
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I?m so glad. You?re wonderful for my self-confidence.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the two forces in each of us the one says we can the other says we can't. Whoever you believe the most is the one who will rule the way of your life.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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A very well-written poem about the two forces in each of us the one says we can the other says we can't. Whoever you believe the most is the one who will rule the way of your life.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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I agree with you totally. I'm trying to establish a writing career, and I'd much rather say Hy Did it, than Ida Bin a writer if I'd only tried. Thank you very much for your comments.
Comment from elmorose
This is such a clever poem and very well written. It put a smile on my face this cold gloomy day. Ida Bin sad if I didn't come across this today. Good luck in the story contest, I think you have a winner here.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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This is such a clever poem and very well written. It put a smile on my face this cold gloomy day. Ida Bin sad if I didn't come across this today. Good luck in the story contest, I think you have a winner here.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much. Hy Did smile when I read your review. I'm so glad you liked the poem, and I appreciate your encouragement.
Comment from Chris Davies
Cleverly done and well constructed. An enjoyable poem with a good message. Ida Bin winner of this contest if you hadn't entered :-). Wish you success with the challenge!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Cleverly done and well constructed. An enjoyable poem with a good message. Ida Bin winner of this contest if you hadn't entered :-). Wish you success with the challenge!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Ida Bin a lot more confident if there weren't so many excellent poems up against mine! Thanks so much for the wonderful review, and I wish you luck in the contest as well.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Just so precious....your imagination and implementation on this was wonderful....would really make a great little motivational children's book as well! ;) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Just so precious....your imagination and implementation on this was wonderful....would really make a great little motivational children's book as well! ;) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and encouragement. I'm very grateful.
Comment from Christine C Autry
This poem was so good I really enjoyed it it was it was just delightful to read it. Thank you so much for your talent and thank you so much for sharing this poem.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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This poem was so good I really enjoyed it it was it was just delightful to read it. Thank you so much for your talent and thank you so much for sharing this poem.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for your incredible comments. I'm very grateful.
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Your Welcome.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is very clever. I love clever writing. It shows an agile mind at work. Not many can pull it off, but you do it well. This should do very well in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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This is very clever. I love clever writing. It shows an agile mind at work. Not many can pull it off, but you do it well. This should do very well in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for the comments, stars and contest wishes.
Comment from BrooklynnPreston
I really do love this. If I may ask, did you mean to write 'said' instead of 'sad'. A really great moral in your poem that everyone should no regardless.
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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I really do love this. If I may ask, did you mean to write 'said' instead of 'sad'. A really great moral in your poem that everyone should no regardless.
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for the review and four stars. Regarding your question, I went back and reread the poem and, yes, "sad" was intended, the idea being "I'd have been sad without you." If others question it as well, I'll go back and see what I can do to change it. Otherwise, if you could give me some suggestions on how I might improve this to bring it from four stars to five, I'd be grateful.
Comment from joycetreasures
This is a cute motivational poem not to give up. Relationships brings many new things in one's life sometimes for the better. Ida Bin and her brother just needed to meet someone which you shared in your poem. Nicely done. Your poem showed that you should never give up. I like how you made the lines to rhyme also.
The image you use was great. I can see Ida and Woody in that photo. Good job!
Such a different and unique poem.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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This is a cute motivational poem not to give up. Relationships brings many new things in one's life sometimes for the better. Ida Bin and her brother just needed to meet someone which you shared in your poem. Nicely done. Your poem showed that you should never give up. I like how you made the lines to rhyme also.
The image you use was great. I can see Ida and Woody in that photo. Good job!
Such a different and unique poem.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for this incredibly kind review and the five stars. I'm very grateful, and so glad you enjoyed the poem.
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you are welcome.
Comment from Sugarray77
This is so cute and you use such hilarious word combos to make this a very lighthearted read. Good moral too. It is an especially good entry for the Story poem prompt. I wish you good luck in the competition.
Melissa
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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This is so cute and you use such hilarious word combos to make this a very lighthearted read. Good moral too. It is an especially good entry for the Story poem prompt. I wish you good luck in the competition.
Melissa
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for the stars, comments and contest wishes. I'm grateful for all.
