Exploring Books
Naani poetry14 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This naani, Exploring Books, uses four lines and twenty-four syllables to get the young reader back into the world of imagination and learning.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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This naani, Exploring Books, uses four lines and twenty-four syllables to get the young reader back into the world of imagination and learning.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Bill, for the wonderful review. Much appreciated.
Melissa
Comment from Joy Graham
Congratulations on second place in this contest. I love that picture :) All my friends are in books too. What a wonderful way of looking at it. I read to escape the real world. I'm grateful to the authors that create my getaway adventures.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Congratulations on second place in this contest. I love that picture :) All my friends are in books too. What a wonderful way of looking at it. I read to escape the real world. I'm grateful to the authors that create my getaway adventures.
Joy xx
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Great review, Joy... I am so glad you enjoyed reading it... I am very fond of reading and enjoy get wrapped up in a good book. Thanks for your delightful comments.
Melissa
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Oh, you have a winner going on here! The overall presentation is absolutely grand. I love your poem because that's what we do when we open a book and start reading. What an adorable illustration you chose. I love your font style and size, making the whole of your presentation perfectly balanced.
Great contest entry!!!
Gale
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Oh, you have a winner going on here! The overall presentation is absolutely grand. I love your poem because that's what we do when we open a book and start reading. What an adorable illustration you chose. I love your font style and size, making the whole of your presentation perfectly balanced.
Great contest entry!!!
Gale
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Gale. I am delighted you like it. I agree... each new book opens a new grand adventure.
All the best,
Melissa
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You are so gifted, Melissa :)
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
I could relate to the words in your poem... how I loved to jump inside the pages of books as a child (and still do). A nicely formatted Naani poem. A solid contest entry. I hope you do well.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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I could relate to the words in your poem... how I loved to jump inside the pages of books as a child (and still do). A nicely formatted Naani poem. A solid contest entry. I hope you do well.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Cindy.
All the best!!
Comment from victor 66
What a delightful endeavor you have in your Naani writing prompt entry . I wonder about the children now and in the future with their ipads and notebooks etc. Will they have the same experience of reading and finding "friends and their grand adventures"? I enjoyed your poem. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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What a delightful endeavor you have in your Naani writing prompt entry . I wonder about the children now and in the future with their ipads and notebooks etc. Will they have the same experience of reading and finding "friends and their grand adventures"? I enjoyed your poem. Best wishes.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Victor!!
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You are entirely welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Naani about exploring our books since an early age and how wonderful it is to have adventures with our old friends and sometimes meet new ones.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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A very well-written Naani about exploring our books since an early age and how wonderful it is to have adventures with our old friends and sometimes meet new ones.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Sandra.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, this is a fantastic Ma'am I you've penned, my friend. I absoulutely love it. I it is like jumping into an adventure with your friends. Lol. Fantastic! Good luck! -Kerry
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Hello there, this is a fantastic Ma'am I you've penned, my friend. I absoulutely love it. I it is like jumping into an adventure with your friends. Lol. Fantastic! Good luck! -Kerry
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Kerry!!
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Mark D. R.
You capture the joy of reading eloquently in your illustration and verse. I especially like 'friends joining in the grand/great adventures.'
Had you asked for an edit suggestion, I would offer:
... waiting to join me in
their grand adventures.
Thank you for sharing your Naani poem (-:
Good luck with your entry.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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You capture the joy of reading eloquently in your illustration and verse. I especially like 'friends joining in the grand/great adventures.'
Had you asked for an edit suggestion, I would offer:
... waiting to join me in
their grand adventures.
Thank you for sharing your Naani poem (-:
Good luck with your entry.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Hey there... Thanks for the great suggestion for this bookish verse... I will have to take a look at that and compare. I really appreciate you taking the time to review, Mark.
Comment from zanya
What a wonderful vignette here in this Naani -of reading and the many sheer joys and pleasures that await us inside the book covers or on our screens - such an appropriate pic
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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What a wonderful vignette here in this Naani -of reading and the many sheer joys and pleasures that await us inside the book covers or on our screens - such an appropriate pic
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Hello, Zanya. Thank you for reviewing my bookish themed verse. I love to read and wanted to share a little about children reading and being taken on adventures. Thanks a lot.
Comment from RodG
I really like this Naani which should appeal to all ages, but especially children who love to read. May I suggest a slight change?
I eagerly opened my book
to find OLD friends
waiting for me to join in
grand NEW adventures
Rod
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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I really like this Naani which should appeal to all ages, but especially children who love to read. May I suggest a slight change?
I eagerly opened my book
to find OLD friends
waiting for me to join in
grand NEW adventures
Rod
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Hello Rod. Thanks, my friend, for reviewing and offering those awesome suggestions. Let me take a look and see how it appears. All the best,
