Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Lovely artwork.
-The topic is good,
as is the syllable count.
-Effective use of one continuous thought.
-I like the sense of adventure
the girl finds as she opens
her book and begins to read.
-I hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019

Hello, Pam. Thank you for reviewing my bookish themed verse. I love to read and wanted to share a little about children reading and being taken on adventures. Thanks a lot.

reply by Pam (respa) on 02-Feb-2019

You are very welcome. I love books and love to read, too!

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

Nice picture that perfectly illustrates your poem - or perhaps it was the other way round.

This captures the world of imagination to be found in books.

Good luck in the contest.

Steve

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019

Thank you Steve.... she just looks like a little girl bent on adventure. I was lucky to find her.

All the best,

Comment from Stephanie Launiu

Excellent

What a beautiful little Naani poem. You seem to have the correct amount of syllables, and the picture brings life to your words. Best of luck in the contest!

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 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019

Thanks so much Stephanie!!

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

Your writing is smooth and the language is colorful. I enjoyed reading this writing so much. you have inspired me, i'ts raining and I think i'll read a book..

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 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019

Thanks a bunch, Meeshu!!