Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

What a great moral to your story, "that people love us." Your poem is so realistic and you philosophically describe life and its meaning in such an inspirational manner. Love way you speak of how many people love us. WELL DONE. Read mine also today. lolol liberty justice

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019

Thank you. I'm happy you like it.

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019

Thank you. I'm happy you like it.

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Hi Damommy! I wish more people would teach their kids that... life is not measured by what you can get, but by what you achieve by giving to others.

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 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019

Thank you. I'm glad you like it.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written free verse poem about life and how we influence the people we know our living years. The love we share with others are valuable and will be remembered long after our light has burned out.

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 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019

Thank you for this lovely review. I hope to leave a good legacy.

Comment from Douglas Paul

Exceptional

You are absolutely right about what success really is. This is very well done from the heart. Good job, my friend.

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 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019

Thank you, dear friend. I appreciate this lovely review.