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Solo on the Mountain

Separated from my twin.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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Hello there, my friend. This is a cute little story getting lost on the mountain. OMG! one of my biggest fears was falling off the lift. lol. It can be fearful in desolate areas and you find you're alone on the mountain. Good luck! ~Kerry

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
    Hello Kerry, thanks for your review. Did you get that it is the mitten that got lost? Reviewers are talking about the story as if it is a human lost on the mountain and no-one is mentioning the mitten. It is one of a pair of mittens, like a twin to the other mitten.
reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 21-Feb-2019
    lol, OMG! No, I didn't realize it was the mitten. lol. The stories even better. I was wondering how no one has seen him get lost and fall off the lift. lol. So sorry for the late reply.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
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This is a great contest entry ... well written, full of drama, terrorizing feelings, scared to death of dying alone, good background history on the twins never before separated, but now they are. You had me on the last two lines :)
Perfect title for this flash fiction, and perfect photo.
I enjoyed this :)
Darn, I had to hurry and update this after seeing I gave you 4 stars by mistake. Here are your five stars :))) so sorry.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
    I'm pleased I could carry the story through until the last 2 lines, and also pleased that you amended the star rating. Grateful thanks for your kind review.
reply by C. Gale Burnett on 11-Feb-2019
    I really am sorry. I'm very fatigued tonight, and should be paying more attention to the keyboard. Thank you for understanding. This truly was a great story!
Comment from JudyE
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I really feel for you in this story. The setting is totally believable and you've drawn the reader in right from the start. I can believe that the imagination would start working overtime if you were caught in this situation. Good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
    I don't really think a lost mitten would have much of an imagination, so I was entertaining myself pretending.
    Thanks for reading my poem and reviewing.
Comment from 24chas
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I enjoyed this read, unknown author. I liked the story and feel like you've got a good foundation for expanding it later. Nice job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
    Thanks for your review and comments. I don't know how much further I can go expanding a story while pretending I am a mitten. Maybe the mitten can have other adventures.
reply by 24chas on 11-Feb-2019
    That would be a cool idea. Since it can narrate it could be symbiotic with its owner. LOL
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
    ...or maybe I could write different stories about different gloves, so I can cover the season. Like a gardening glove, a mountainbiking glove, church glove etc. you have sparked my imagination now. Thank you for the suggestion.
reply by 24chas on 11-Feb-2019
    That would be awesome. You could call it "A Glove Story." GRRROOOAANNN Sorry, had to try it.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
    Yes that was groan worthy! and grin worthy.