Be Wee With Bea
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Being Wee"An allegory in the Winnie the Pooh genre
10 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for telling us what being wee is all about and adding the photograph that helped to inspire you. I appreciate your sharing Bea's exercises and wisdom. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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Thank you for telling us what being wee is all about and adding the photograph that helped to inspire you. I appreciate your sharing Bea's exercises and wisdom. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 21-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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Thank you for searching out the last chap of this book. Thank you for your encouraging review. I am saving enough member $$ to be able to post Chap of Part 2...soon
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I hope you are able to post the next part soon. Smiles- Joan
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It is posted...thank you. If you hope to earn member $$ wait til Sun.
Comment from Accasej
I thoroughly enjoyed this as a children's book I presume?? I'll have to check out your link as I have nephews & nieces I think this would be swell for ð???.
Well done!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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I thoroughly enjoyed this as a children's book I presume?? I'll have to check out your link as I have nephews & nieces I think this would be swell for ð???.
Well done!
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your encouraging review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes, I am certain your nephews & nieces would enjoy it. Thank you.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Liz,
This is an absolutely delightful story. And very well written. Nothing Ican see here to suggest you consider improving upon. Thanks for sharing your work. Jan
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Hi Liz,
This is an absolutely delightful story. And very well written. Nothing Ican see here to suggest you consider improving upon. Thanks for sharing your work. Jan
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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thank you for your encouraging review. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. This is the end of this part but I will be posting part two. So keep your eye out
Comment from D.Ream
This is an original and well-crafted chapter which invites the reader to take a walk with the character and to learn and to think. The reader is asked to challenge their own preconceptions and to choose a different path. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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This is an original and well-crafted chapter which invites the reader to take a walk with the character and to learn and to think. The reader is asked to challenge their own preconceptions and to choose a different path. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your encouraging review. I'm glad you saw the value in it. You understood my intent. Thank you.
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Liz. so good to read your work again. sorry, I have been so remiss in watching for your posts. I will try to do better. Are you aware of how very unique your writing is? Nobody on this site now or ever has had anything like it that i can remember. Is it aimed at a certain frame of people or good for everyone young at heart. Love it. Bob
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Hi, Liz. so good to read your work again. sorry, I have been so remiss in watching for your posts. I will try to do better. Are you aware of how very unique your writing is? Nobody on this site now or ever has had anything like it that i can remember. Is it aimed at a certain frame of people or good for everyone young at heart. Love it. Bob
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Wow Bob, thank you so much for your understanding review. You have comprehended one my intents in writing this book. I hope to get some help by posting the unpublished part 2 of my book. So stay tuned.
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I will. time is the thing with me. LOL Bob
Comment from Christine C Autry
This was very good I enjoyed it I think children will enjoy it too. I like the way you Incorporated good things into your writing very well written and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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This was very good I enjoyed it I think children will enjoy it too. I like the way you Incorporated good things into your writing very well written and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your supportive review. I'm glad you have enjoyed this.
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You are Welcome.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is outstanding, Liz. Your story is really quite profound. So many wonderful lines and wisdom within. These lines stood out but they are not the only ones:
"You see, she doesn't really very often think of life as a problem, as long as she remembers to talk to the maker. We've noticed many times when she'd forgotten to do that. But when she finally did her talk to the maker exercise, she calmed down and things worked out as they were supposed to."
A virtual sixer. Fabulous. Marilyn
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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This is outstanding, Liz. Your story is really quite profound. So many wonderful lines and wisdom within. These lines stood out but they are not the only ones:
"You see, she doesn't really very often think of life as a problem, as long as she remembers to talk to the maker. We've noticed many times when she'd forgotten to do that. But when she finally did her talk to the maker exercise, she calmed down and things worked out as they were supposed to."
A virtual sixer. Fabulous. Marilyn
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much. The fact that you are enjoying the series so much is enough. The stars are just stars. I'm soon to post the beginning of Part 2, yet unpublished, but it will help me to get feedback for it. So it is not the end of being wee.
Comment from Sally Law
This is enchanting and I love the truth of God's word and the Lord our Maker woven throughout your stories. Bee is a wee one, just like we all are. I am reminded as I read this, just how God made us to be dependent on Him.
All my best,
Sal :+)
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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This is enchanting and I love the truth of God's word and the Lord our Maker woven throughout your stories. Bee is a wee one, just like we all are. I am reminded as I read this, just how God made us to be dependent on Him.
All my best,
Sal :+)
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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I'm so glad you got the spiritual message intended. Thank you for your supportive review.
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You?re so welcome! Sal :+)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Just lovely, Liz -- and this doesn't mean the end of Bea, right? I've really enjoyed reading about her and all her friends!! ;) ;) Listen and to watch and to figure her feelings into both ... Bea is really good at that! ;) :) Thanx so much for sharing her (and her friends!) and I look forward to more! ;) ;) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Just lovely, Liz -- and this doesn't mean the end of Bea, right? I've really enjoyed reading about her and all her friends!! ;) ;) Listen and to watch and to figure her feelings into both ... Bea is really good at that! ;) :) Thanx so much for sharing her (and her friends!) and I look forward to more! ;) ;) Yvette :)
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your supportive review. I am so pleased you are hoping for more. I have written part 2. The characters in the next book concern the woman and her dogs who later entered my life. Sadly, everyone except Bea/myself has gone to the Rainbow Bridge. So they've all been immortalized through my book.
Comment from lyenochka
So is this the concluding chapter? It's a good message to to children to accept being "wee" and be comfortable with the humbleness as Bee showed us how to be.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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So is this the concluding chapter? It's a good message to to children to accept being "wee" and be comfortable with the humbleness as Bee showed us how to be.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for following my writings. I appreciate your support.
