Love Until Death Do You Part
A lifelong bond13 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-3-2, Love Until Death Do You Part, has the syllables set up correctly and makes that pledge at the first breath to the final one.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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This 2-3-2, Love Until Death Do You Part, has the syllables set up correctly and makes that pledge at the first breath to the final one.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Bill.
Comment from Coco Jane
This captures the joy of parenthood perfectly. Even though a just-born baby is messy and kind of blue, Mom and Dad love him or her with more than they thought they had in them. Nicely done. Good picture too.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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This captures the joy of parenthood perfectly. Even though a just-born baby is messy and kind of blue, Mom and Dad love him or her with more than they thought they had in them. Nicely done. Good picture too.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Thank you for this kind review. It's a different kind of love. I think that it surpasses all other loves.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ohhhh my; how this one melted me. When I read the title, I expected something quite different. BEAUTIFUL take on the adage Love at First Sight. I will always remember this poem. (But just to help with that, I'm bookcasing it.) xo
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Ohhhh my; how this one melted me. When I read the title, I expected something quite different. BEAUTIFUL take on the adage Love at First Sight. I will always remember this poem. (But just to help with that, I'm bookcasing it.) xo
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Thanks again, Rachelle, for all of your encouragement. You keep a girl writing.
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What a nice response. :)
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Oh my goodness, that baby is sooooo cute. Awe....
This is such a wonderful little poem. Yup, at the very first sight of our newborn an incredible bond of love sweeps over you. Good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Oh my goodness, that baby is sooooo cute. Awe....
This is such a wonderful little poem. Yup, at the very first sight of our newborn an incredible bond of love sweeps over you. Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 22-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Kerry. You get swept away with love, don't you? It's an incredible experience to know that much love for someone.
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lol. You're very welcome. So sorry for the late reply:))
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
Oh, absolutely! Only death can separate. This is a wonderful 2-3-2 with an awesome picture complementing it. The background colour is so soft, it is perfect.
I wish you will do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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Oh, absolutely! Only death can separate. This is a wonderful 2-3-2 with an awesome picture complementing it. The background colour is so soft, it is perfect.
I wish you will do well in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your kind words, Sandra Elizabeth. I am so glad that you enjoyed my 7 syllables.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Adorable photo of the baby holding someone's finger. I have a friend
who is due anyday. Yes, the labor pains hurt. When one sees the baby,
its all love and the pain goes away. Love is at first sight and tears flow.
flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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Adorable photo of the baby holding someone's finger. I have a friend
who is due anyday. Yes, the labor pains hurt. When one sees the baby,
its all love and the pain goes away. Love is at first sight and tears flow.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 22-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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Childbirth is definitely the best example of love at first sight. Thanks for reading and reviewing my little poem.
Comment from jenintorre
This is an excellent 3-2-3 poem. It is so difficult to put over a message in so few syllables but you have done it here. I think you have a winner. Good luck and Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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This is an excellent 3-2-3 poem. It is so difficult to put over a message in so few syllables but you have done it here. I think you have a winner. Good luck and Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Jen. I'm so glad that you like it.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective use of one continuous thought.
-The use of "take hold" is appropriate
because it goes with the picture very well.
-It does take just one glimpse to
be in love with a new infant.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective use of one continuous thought.
-The use of "take hold" is appropriate
because it goes with the picture very well.
-It does take just one glimpse to
be in love with a new infant.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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Thank you for this thorough review and encouragement.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Malerie
The picture alone just captures the readers heart. This is truly were real
Love starts. Your words are written in a way that grasp the readers heart. Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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The picture alone just captures the readers heart. This is truly were real
Love starts. Your words are written in a way that grasp the readers heart. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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Thank you for this kind review, Malerie.
Comment from Sally Law
Aw, how sweet and precious. You captured so much in your short form poetry. A fine 2-3-2 and entry for the contest,
All my best to you and yours. Don't let go...
Sally :+)
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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Aw, how sweet and precious. You captured so much in your short form poetry. A fine 2-3-2 and entry for the contest,
All my best to you and yours. Don't let go...
Sally :+)
Comment Written 22-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Sally. You can't let go.
