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Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings

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Comment from sfharper
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Good comparison of history to modern times, good match to the title. I wonder if you could use more consistent stanza size, but it has enough breaks and subject changes to be okay. I found it interesting to read.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the review and compliments. I tend to rant and write on various topics of interest.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is quite a shocking write with some misconceptions and media can paint a dim picture when it wants to and a glowing picture when it so decides, history will certainly record the unrest, but the real results of this term of office won't be revealed for years and then the view may be totally different as he real truth coms out, time will tell, I wish you luck with the contest, food for thought here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
    Yes the secrets, worked in aerospace 80',s on. Interesting process. Thank you for the review and insight always great to hear from all perspectives.
Comment from Malerie
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Quite a ah moment. Unfortunately there appears to be so much hate in society for various reasons. Hates breeds hate. This is a powerful piece that evokes thoughts and makes th3 readers think. The picture you selected really add to the emotions of your work.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the review and compliments.
Comment from jmshumate
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Good job on this, and good job on not ignoring. Im unable to accept a man who embraces dictators, thrives on the fear and resentment of others, and much more. We've had presidents like this one before, but this guy flaunts it openly and arrogantly. Lord have mercy on us all. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the review and compliments.
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Mystery Author,

Bravo!!!! Standing ovation here!

You sure nailed this one. Spectacular contest entry. The finest I have ever seen, honestly. Best of luck to you in the booth!

And thank you for addressing this internationally disgraceful, illiterate hateful regieme.

Jan

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the review and compliments.
Comment from Sandra Leon-Gonzalez
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It absolutely turned ugly in every way possible. How could it be that is allowed in what should be the world's most powerful country. I totally understand. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the review and compliments.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Dear Anonymous Poet,

I agree with you 100%. When this 'contender' announced he was running, I thought it was a joke. The man has NO political experience, NO military experience, and NO foreign policy experience.

I've tried to point to the similarities between NOW and the early days of the Nazis in Germany, but I was told that it was stupid.

Yup--I'm sure that's what some of the citizens of the 1930s Germany thought, too.

Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,

~Mustang Patty~

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the review and compliments.