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The world is a stage32 total reviews
Comment from 24chas
Oh my God, what a story, Rachelle. This was great. I was so absorbed in it. I couldn't quite figure where it was going. I thought it odd that Lila was given flashlights if wolves are drawn to light, but I just dismissed it. Great characters make a great story and you had them. Ingenious.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
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Oh my God, what a story, Rachelle. This was great. I was so absorbed in it. I couldn't quite figure where it was going. I thought it odd that Lila was given flashlights if wolves are drawn to light, but I just dismissed it. Great characters make a great story and you had them. Ingenious.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
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Thank you. It's always nice when a sociopath can be outsmarted...even by her own mother...even when it causes her death...Do you think I need to see someone about these dysfunctional family stories I can't seem to stop writing, chas?!
Thank you for ANOTHER sixth star this morning (talk about guilt! Now you're down to only four for the remainder of the week!) I do appreciate your ongoing positive reinforcement. xo
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No guilt. I just bestow them on quality and don't think about how many I have. :)
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Exactly the same with me.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Rachelle,
This is a creepy story. It made me rethink what I'd read, so I read it over three times. Yikes.
You created well-defined characters and you set the scene well. I loved the 'game,' and your explanation of why the Mom could act so well.
Thank you for sharing,
~MP~
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
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Hi, Rachelle,
This is a creepy story. It made me rethink what I'd read, so I read it over three times. Yikes.
You created well-defined characters and you set the scene well. I loved the 'game,' and your explanation of why the Mom could act so well.
Thank you for sharing,
~MP~
Comment Written 03-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
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Ihanks, MP; I'm glad you liked it!
