Discovering
A poem for the young and young at heart34 total reviews
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Great rhyme, effective images and a theme to reminiscent. I like how the story builds up and each following stanza increases the delight of reading.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019
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Great rhyme, effective images and a theme to reminiscent. I like how the story builds up and each following stanza increases the delight of reading.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019
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I am so pleased you enjoyed reading DISCOVERING, Donna.
Comment from Sally Law
I love this, it reminds me of my grandsons who love to play in the rain. A beautiful photo and poem of the wonder of nature bound up in a child. This will do very well in the contest.
All my best,
Sally :+)
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019
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I love this, it reminds me of my grandsons who love to play in the rain. A beautiful photo and poem of the wonder of nature bound up in a child. This will do very well in the contest.
All my best,
Sally :+)
Comment Written 04-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019
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I am delighted DISCOVERING reminds you of your grandsons at play. As I wrote it, I was thinking of my own son years ago playing in the water. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a lovely sonnet and you did a beautiful job of drawing in the reader to those memories. Your use of nostalgia was very well crafted and incorporated, sound, color, and very good descriptive phrases. Well done.
Melissa
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019
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This is a lovely sonnet and you did a beautiful job of drawing in the reader to those memories. Your use of nostalgia was very well crafted and incorporated, sound, color, and very good descriptive phrases. Well done.
Melissa
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019
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I am truly delighted you enjoyed the imagery o DISCOVERING, Melissa. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from moongirlwriter
I'm so sorry, I don't know all the rules of a sonnet so I can't really judge your work on following the rules. What I can tell you is, I love this poem. . .it definitely speaks to the little person "inside" of me. I taught pre-school for 20 years and this definitely touches my heart their their precious sense of wonder. The artwork you have chosen fits perfectly. :)
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019
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I'm so sorry, I don't know all the rules of a sonnet so I can't really judge your work on following the rules. What I can tell you is, I love this poem. . .it definitely speaks to the little person "inside" of me. I taught pre-school for 20 years and this definitely touches my heart their their precious sense of wonder. The artwork you have chosen fits perfectly. :)
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019
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Don?t worry about the rules, Moongirlwriter. I am thrilled DISCOVERING speaks to the little person inside you. That was my intent. Many thanks for your kind praise.
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