Leo
King of the sun signs47 total reviews
Comment from Colin John
Lovely well thought out poem Rachelle and you picked on the one animal along with the crocodile i fear the most, so you are right its better if he loves as no chance if he is not. I can find no snags and good luck in the competition.Kind Regards John
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Lovely well thought out poem Rachelle and you picked on the one animal along with the crocodile i fear the most, so you are right its better if he loves as no chance if he is not. I can find no snags and good luck in the competition.Kind Regards John
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Thank you, John. I finished second, and was happy with that since the entry that one, Gemini, was exceptional. (Read it if you haven't - it won't scare you or anything!) xo
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That's great well done, i did vote for one but cannot remember which. congratulations X
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Lol!! I love your candor, John!
Comment from meeshu
this is great, you have humanized your lion muse just a little. just a cute and cuddly cat with big, nasty, pointy teeth. well done, Rachelle.....................meeshu
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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this is great, you have humanized your lion muse just a little. just a cute and cuddly cat with big, nasty, pointy teeth. well done, Rachelle.....................meeshu
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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And claws...but the trashy hair nullifies it all, Meeshu...
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I forgot to mention the hair heheh
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What?!! The ESSENCE of a Leo?!! tsk on you, Meeshu.
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very clever and humourous poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I love tha artwork and presentation. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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This is a very clever and humourous poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I love tha artwork and presentation. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you, Jen. It was such a fun contest prompt! Did you read the one by Boogienights that won? It was entitled "Gemini" and it was hilarious and excellent. I know you'd like it, too.
I appreciate this very nice review. xo
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Yes. It was good but I preferred yours. Congratulations on coming second. X
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Oh, you sweet-talkin' reviewer, you!! Thanks for that warm cyber hug. xo
Comment from Bichon
Great poem! You have done a lovely write about the zodiac signs and personified it with a lion, which is a great idea. I always did think of a lion when I heard Leo!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Great poem! You have done a lovely write about the zodiac signs and personified it with a lion, which is a great idea. I always did think of a lion when I heard Leo!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you, Bichon! It was a fun contest. Did you check out the Gemini one that won? It was adorable, and absolutely deserved first place. xo
Comment from RGstar
Oh well, I guess I am in good stead because I am a Leo...and Virgo...I guess I have a bit of both.
Nicely said, I like the way you start with what could be perceived as negative and a bit bossy, but came back with the balance of strong points.
Strength in both.
Wishing you a great day.
RGstar
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Oh well, I guess I am in good stead because I am a Leo...and Virgo...I guess I have a bit of both.
Nicely said, I like the way you start with what could be perceived as negative and a bit bossy, but came back with the balance of strong points.
Strength in both.
Wishing you a great day.
RGstar
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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You are in VERY good stead! Flashy AND organized!! Yin and yang - all in one creative type! Thanks for the nice review, RGstar. xo
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You are welcome :)
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Leo", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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"Leo", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Lol! That's okay, duchessofdrur; I'll take a warm and wonderful review like this any day instead of a sixth star. I love this review. xo
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Rachelle, my possum, it's an excellent piece.
YOU KEEP WRITING!!
Take care and God bless,
the Duchess !(-_-)!
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Okay, Duchess; I've been called a LOT of things in my life, but 'my possum' has not happened until you. xo
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Rachelle,
There are millions of things worse than being called possum.
Take care and God bless,
the Duchess !(-_-)!
Comment from Mark D. R.
Do like your Leo profile. My father was a Gemini but named Leo! So, your last line is very appropriate to me.
Your description is very expressive in describing your astrological profile, which I know nothing about.
Good luck in your writing prompt entry.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Do like your Leo profile. My father was a Gemini but named Leo! So, your last line is very appropriate to me.
Your description is very expressive in describing your astrological profile, which I know nothing about.
Good luck in your writing prompt entry.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thanks, Mark. I like this review very much. Thanks for the well-wishes in the contest; I finished second! GrrrARRR!!
Comment from Janet Foor
Great poem Rachelle. You can definitely overlook some shortcomings when the positives outweigh the negatives. I sure hope those close to me forgive and overlook mine.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Great poem Rachelle. You can definitely overlook some shortcomings when the positives outweigh the negatives. I sure hope those close to me forgive and overlook mine.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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I bet anything they do! Why, we are so charming, we Leos, Janet, how could they possibly not!! xo
Comment from Michele Harber
I was in love with a Leo once. The problem was, so was he. He's the person about whom I wrote "The Snake." I'm not a big believer in astrology, yet every word you said matches him to the letter. Your short, staccato lines make the poem quick and fun, and I like the playfulness of your rhymes ("dramatic and flashy"/"borderline trashy"). Good luck in the contest, my FSBF.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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I was in love with a Leo once. The problem was, so was he. He's the person about whom I wrote "The Snake." I'm not a big believer in astrology, yet every word you said matches him to the letter. Your short, staccato lines make the poem quick and fun, and I like the playfulness of your rhymes ("dramatic and flashy"/"borderline trashy"). Good luck in the contest, my FSBF.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Oh my! And here you are in a relationship now with another one. I'm more self-effacing than it sounds as if he was, though, so PHEW! You had me worried there for a minute.
I'm glad you liked the poem; I finished second in the contest. Boogienights did an OUTSTANDING job with her entry about Geminis. It absolutely deserved the win.
Thanks for the encouragement, as always FSBF. xo
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Relax. My Leo was back in my college and post-college days. His good side was amazing, but the bad side kept me from ever go beyond friendship. I married the man I was meant to be with nearly 24 years ago.
Congratulations on taking 2nd place in the contest! I?ll make a point of reading the winning poem.
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My college love sounds a whole lot like yours: the most fascinating man he ever knew.
Comment from Artasylum
Hey Rachelle Allen... this is a very fun representation of LEO... one of my favorite signs Rachelle... thanks so much for the fun read and great, good luck in your contest... diana
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Hey Rachelle Allen... this is a very fun representation of LEO... one of my favorite signs Rachelle... thanks so much for the fun read and great, good luck in your contest... diana
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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One of your favorite signs because you ARE one, Diana, or you have loved ones who are? (Inquiring minds want to know!)
Thank you for the nice review. I loved it. xo
