Leo
King of the sun signs47 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written astrological poem about Leo which describes the sign very well. They are also proud and their children will be protected at all costs. Some can also be narcissistic.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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A very well-written astrological poem about Leo which describes the sign very well. They are also proud and their children will be protected at all costs. Some can also be narcissistic.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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This is true; but I couldn't find much that rhymed with narcissistic.
Thanks for the fun review, Sandra. xo
Comment from Gail Denham
Aha - two meanings here - Leo is August isn't it? or somewhere near that. Good job with the rhythm and the rhyme. I like the line "that is borderline trashy". Great line. Enjoyed your poem.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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Aha - two meanings here - Leo is August isn't it? or somewhere near that. Good job with the rhythm and the rhyme. I like the line "that is borderline trashy". Great line. Enjoyed your poem.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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I accept my truths, Gail; love me, love my trashy hair. And, yes, Leos have late-July to late-August birthdays.
Thanks for the fun review. xo
Comment from Lance S. Loria
As a Leo, I must agree, except for the bad hair day. LoL. I think you've captured the Leo â??•¸?. Nothing to critique here. So good luck in the contest b
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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As a Leo, I must agree, except for the bad hair day. LoL. I think you've captured the Leo â??•¸?. Nothing to critique here. So good luck in the contest b
Comment Written 21-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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What, Lance? No bad hair days for you?! Well, I'm putting in my request now to be you in the next life, then, because I have enough bad hair days for an entire pride of Leos!
Thanks for the nice review. xo
Comment from royowen
I must admit I'm a Libran, but have no idea what a libran's characteristics are. But you've done a great job od analysing your Leolion character Traits, so congratulations on your very well scribed entry in this astrological signs contest, well rhymed in abcb stanzas in varying meter well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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I must admit I'm a Libran, but have no idea what a libran's characteristics are. But you've done a great job od analysing your Leolion character Traits, so congratulations on your very well scribed entry in this astrological signs contest, well rhymed in abcb stanzas in varying meter well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 21-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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Librans are the sweetest of the zodiac - attractive , kind and gentle of spirit, and always fair. I love my Libra friends.
Thank you for your kind (fair, sweet and gentle) review. You know I always love your feedback. xo
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Wow, thank you, and my pleasure
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-I like your poem, the style,
rhyme, and imagery.
-It flows well, and shows
the traits of a lion
and the spirit of a Leo.
-I like this description,
"always right,
never wrong."
-I also like the line
about the cat protecting you.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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-Good image and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-I like your poem, the style,
rhyme, and imagery.
-It flows well, and shows
the traits of a lion
and the spirit of a Leo.
-I like this description,
"always right,
never wrong."
-I also like the line
about the cat protecting you.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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Ah, my wonderful, thorough reviewer!! Thank you for all this helpful feedback. You know how much I always appreciate it from you. xo
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You are very welcome, mystery writer. I appreciate your compliment very much. I enjoyed the poem. Thought I would mention that I am an Aries!!
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I never met an Aries I didn't like - starting with my dad.
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That's cool! Thanks for sharing.
Comment from LisaMay
You have portrayed the Leo attributes very well in your poem. I can see you would be a good friend, the loyalty, being big-hearted and playful sides are most appealing, but ditch the bossy and opinionated please!
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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You have portrayed the Leo attributes very well in your poem. I can see you would be a good friend, the loyalty, being big-hearted and playful sides are most appealing, but ditch the bossy and opinionated please!
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Comment Written 21-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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I can't ditch my bossy, opinionated ways any more than you can ditch being a mega-versatile and talented writer. It's just my nature, and you'll have to love me anyway. (see what I did there? I just bossed you around...) Thanks for the fun review. xo
Comment from JudyE
I must make my husband read this! I'm a Leo and love your poem. I cringed a bit at bossy, flashy and always right but you can't argue with the truth, can you? Good luck in the contest. :)
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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I must make my husband read this! I'm a Leo and love your poem. I cringed a bit at bossy, flashy and always right but you can't argue with the truth, can you? Good luck in the contest. :)
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Comment Written 21-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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No, Judy - but it really IS part of our charm. It balances out the more adorable qualities - like silliness and perpetual bed head! I should have known you were a Leo; I always get along really well with fellow lions. GrrARRR! xo
