A Walk Through The Woods
Caught by surprise.22 total reviews
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is an outstanding poem and I really enjoyed it. I can just imagine how you felt out alone like that. So glad it just turned out to be a branch that caught on your clothing. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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This is an outstanding poem and I really enjoyed it. I can just imagine how you felt out alone like that. So glad it just turned out to be a branch that caught on your clothing. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this nice review, I'm really glad you took the time to read my poem. :)
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You are very welcome,
Comment from Paul McFarland
Congratulations on your win. This is an excellent poem with good rhyme. I really like the touch of Frost that you sneaked in.
The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
And I do love your poem a heap.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Congratulations on your win. This is an excellent poem with good rhyme. I really like the touch of Frost that you sneaked in.
The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
And I do love your poem a heap.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Robert Frost is my favorite poet and he would be proud of this review...I know it made me happy! Thanks. :)
Comment from Hitcher
I see you are the contest winner... congratulations!
I enjoyed your little story in poem, it definitely made me smile.
You know women shouldn't go for walks in the woods alone because you just never know what kind of branch or twig your gonna run into... you got lucky, ha ha
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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I see you are the contest winner... congratulations!
I enjoyed your little story in poem, it definitely made me smile.
You know women shouldn't go for walks in the woods alone because you just never know what kind of branch or twig your gonna run into... you got lucky, ha ha
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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You are so right...those branches can be deadly..lol. Thank you for reading my poem.:)
Comment from CandySoda777
I like the rhythm and style of your poem. Its nice and simple, but still able to keep your reader reading along. Well done on winning the contest! Is this a true story?
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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I like the rhythm and style of your poem. Its nice and simple, but still able to keep your reader reading along. Well done on winning the contest! Is this a true story?
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Yes! I was walking down a trail in jay cooke state park, when my sweater hooked a thin but long branch that I dragged along for awhile. I was certain that I was being followed!..lol. Thank you for reading. :)
Comment from lancellot
I can totally see this happening. Those nature trails can get dark and lonely real quick. Before you know it you're imagining a killer in every shadow or behind every tree.
Well written.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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I can totally see this happening. Those nature trails can get dark and lonely real quick. Before you know it you're imagining a killer in every shadow or behind every tree.
Well written.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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It's true and I have a wild imagination. Lately I've been scared of my own shadow, too many scary movies I guess. Thanks for the nice review. :)
Comment from equestrik
This is a fantastic write! I totally loved your reference to Robert Frost's poem and Loved the feel of being in the woods looking forward to what creatures you might see..and I am still chuckling about the branch-wonderful!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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This is a fantastic write! I totally loved your reference to Robert Frost's poem and Loved the feel of being in the woods looking forward to what creatures you might see..and I am still chuckling about the branch-wonderful!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Thanks for this great 6 star review, it means a lot to me. You are awesome! :)
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
I enjoyed your poem and story! Narrative poems are among my favorite and yours is excellent! I also found your picture a foreshadow of what was to come--branches! I did not know about the fence....
My best in this contest, Deborah.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Dear Author,
I enjoyed your poem and story! Narrative poems are among my favorite and yours is excellent! I also found your picture a foreshadow of what was to come--branches! I did not know about the fence....
My best in this contest, Deborah.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Thank you for such a nice review, I really appreciate it.
Comment from AprilViolet
Plot twist!! I love this poem! So humorous with some added suspense! That sounds like exactly like something I would do! So glad now that I dont go hiking;) thanks for sharing your excellent poem!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Plot twist!! I love this poem! So humorous with some added suspense! That sounds like exactly like something I would do! So glad now that I dont go hiking;) thanks for sharing your excellent poem!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the six stars!
Comment from Michele Harber
This is a well-written and interesting poem in its own right, but to know that your whole story was inspired by those three words is amazing. The story is inventive and fun to read, flows smoothly, and your rhymes work well. The only thing I might suggest is breaking it into stanzas for visual appeal and ease of reading. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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This is a well-written and interesting poem in its own right, but to know that your whole story was inspired by those three words is amazing. The story is inventive and fun to read, flows smoothly, and your rhymes work well. The only thing I might suggest is breaking it into stanzas for visual appeal and ease of reading. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Thank you for taking time to read and review, it means a lot to me. :)
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You're very welcome.
Comment from royowen
We have a mythical savage creature called a Bunyip. It lurks in lakes and rivers and billabongs, (an isolated pond) that waits for unsuspecting victims to ravage. (Although I don't know who's seen one) So well dine with this nicely written work in articulate couplet, it was smooth and very entertaining, a good entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blesings, Roy
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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We have a mythical savage creature called a Bunyip. It lurks in lakes and rivers and billabongs, (an isolated pond) that waits for unsuspecting victims to ravage. (Although I don't know who's seen one) So well dine with this nicely written work in articulate couplet, it was smooth and very entertaining, a good entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blesings, Roy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Thanks so much for this great review. If a creature like that lived in our area I'd move!! :)
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Well done
