Her Blue Eyes Seek into my Soul
long-term relationships2 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
You're syllable count works for me, I'm married to a lady with brown eyes and yet I get the same feeling from her as expressed in your poem. To be in love is a gift and I appreciate her everyday. Good words, good message and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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You're syllable count works for me, I'm married to a lady with brown eyes and yet I get the same feeling from her as expressed in your poem. To be in love is a gift and I appreciate her everyday. Good words, good message and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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It happens that my wife has those blue eyes!
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A gift for you as well.
Comment from phill doran
Hello Anon
This is lovely. Eyes, soul and heart, all in such a small space. I trust you will do well with this. In passing - I think rhythm is a two-syllable word when it is both written and read, so you are on safe ground and well within the contest shape.
I wish you well with this and your continued writing
cheers
phill
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Hello Anon
This is lovely. Eyes, soul and heart, all in such a small space. I trust you will do well with this. In passing - I think rhythm is a two-syllable word when it is both written and read, so you are on safe ground and well within the contest shape.
I wish you well with this and your continued writing
cheers
phill
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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phill
I am safe for 'rhythm' with you! But would 'chasm' and 'prism' get the same treatment? LOL
with thanks for your review!
Anon
