The Thunder Booms
3-5-7 poetry8 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I am not sure why your poetry is no longer coming up in my mail. I will fan you again today to see what's up. A fine offering here for the 3-5-7 Poetry Contest. The picture is hypnotic and perfect for your fine works. I hope you well and good.
All my best,
Sal :+)
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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I am not sure why your poetry is no longer coming up in my mail. I will fan you again today to see what's up. A fine offering here for the 3-5-7 Poetry Contest. The picture is hypnotic and perfect for your fine works. I hope you well and good.
All my best,
Sal :+)
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Hello Sal. I have been off of FS for several days... just so busy!! Thank you for the lovely review!
Melissa
Comment from dragonpoet
What a quick and concise description of a thunderstorm. The artwork is well chosen.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing. Have a good day.
Joan
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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What a quick and concise description of a thunderstorm. The artwork is well chosen.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing. Have a good day.
Joan
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Joan!!
Melissa
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You are most kindly welcome, Melissa.
~Joan
Comment from sunnilicious
So many alliterations in such a short poem. That's okay, because it all worked together nicely. Well thought out and clearly written. Great work. And congratulations on taking home a win placement in the contest :)
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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So many alliterations in such a short poem. That's okay, because it all worked together nicely. Well thought out and clearly written. Great work. And congratulations on taking home a win placement in the contest :)
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much!!
Melissa
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
Exquisite photograph and poem! It evokes a haunting emotion and I can almost hear the crash of thunder following the bolt! Excellent writing and poem.
My best, Deborah
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Dear Author,
Exquisite photograph and poem! It evokes a haunting emotion and I can almost hear the crash of thunder following the bolt! Excellent writing and poem.
My best, Deborah
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Thanks so much, Deborah!
Comment from Kierra Bailey
Beautiful. These few words transport me back to every summer night storm. So calming in all it's rage. You have included many sensory elements in this short piece, and created a real experience. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Beautiful. These few words transport me back to every summer night storm. So calming in all it's rage. You have included many sensory elements in this short piece, and created a real experience. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Thanks so much, Kierra!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, I've always thought the weather is just beautiful -- and your words here really do it justice!! :) A wonderful offering for this contest ! :) ;) Thank you so very much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :) :)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Oh, I've always thought the weather is just beautiful -- and your words here really do it justice!! :) A wonderful offering for this contest ! :) ;) Thank you so very much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :) :)
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thanks so much for the lovely review!!!
Comment from Colette
"Thunder booms
as lightening streaks
throughout the turbulent skies" .
This is a wonderful entry, accompanies by an apt graphic. I wish you the very
best in competition.
Colette
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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"Thunder booms
as lightening streaks
throughout the turbulent skies" .
This is a wonderful entry, accompanies by an apt graphic. I wish you the very
best in competition.
Colette
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the wonderful review.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
This is a great 3-5-7. It reads like a short story. Very nice verse and image. Best of luck in the competition and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
This is a great 3-5-7. It reads like a short story. Very nice verse and image. Best of luck in the competition and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the wonderful review.
