A Werewolf's Sonnet
What Makes A Monster A Monster contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Well, this is monstrously good!! Chilling, taunting, haunting. I was covered in goose bumps by the time I finished reading it! And as if all that weren't enough, what a great job you did 'manipulating' a regular wolf to look like that!! Very impressive entry. Good luck in the contest. xo
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Well, this is monstrously good!! Chilling, taunting, haunting. I was covered in goose bumps by the time I finished reading it! And as if all that weren't enough, what a great job you did 'manipulating' a regular wolf to look like that!! Very impressive entry. Good luck in the contest. xo
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Rachelle. I'm glad you liked my little tale. Have a great night.
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You're welcome!! It was terrific!
Comment from LyndaS
This is an excellent sonnet with a killer presentation. You have beautifully described your monster and what makes him tick. I like in the end he accepts himself for who he is. A monster. Well done. Lynda
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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This is an excellent sonnet with a killer presentation. You have beautifully described your monster and what makes him tick. I like in the end he accepts himself for who he is. A monster. Well done. Lynda
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Wow, thank you so much for the fantastic review and gracious sixer, Lynda. I dearly appreciate it. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Rmocruz
Excellent rhyming is presented in quatrain formatting.
A well penned horror story in a poem.
I believe this is a worthy entry in the monster poetry contest.
Best of luck!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Excellent rhyming is presented in quatrain formatting.
A well penned horror story in a poem.
I believe this is a worthy entry in the monster poetry contest.
Best of luck!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Rmocruz. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Colin John
Very nice horror werewolf sonnet , well presented should do well in the competition .
Wish I had time to do one myself but I would be up against this one, so maybe not . Kind Regards Colin
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Very nice horror werewolf sonnet , well presented should do well in the competition .
Wish I had time to do one myself but I would be up against this one, so maybe not . Kind Regards Colin
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Lol, oh come on, Colin, join in the fun. Thank you for the excellent review and generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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I will wait to find out who you are spooky , but I have s good idea . Lol.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A werewolf sonnet......how cool! And I love the flow from description to revulsion to acceptance of beast and self -- well done. :) :) I would suggest popping back in there and change the "I've" in the last line of the second stanza to "I'd" ... thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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A werewolf sonnet......how cool! And I love the flow from description to revulsion to acceptance of beast and self -- well done. :) :) I would suggest popping back in there and change the "I've" in the last line of the second stanza to "I'd" ... thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review and for pointing out the goof, YMR. I fixed it. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this twisted piece.
