Man's Best Friend
A night for a father/son team in an out-of-town bar27 total reviews
Comment from Miss Sherry
A saucy and sexy story that pops with energy and has great imagery. I love the Pete, Re-Pete bit. The reader couldn't get bored with this story if they tried. I really like the voice of the writer - brash, funny and leaving the reader shaking their head in delight!!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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A saucy and sexy story that pops with energy and has great imagery. I love the Pete, Re-Pete bit. The reader couldn't get bored with this story if they tried. I really like the voice of the writer - brash, funny and leaving the reader shaking their head in delight!!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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What a really nice review this is! Thank you, Miss Sherry! I appreciate it very much.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really good and very funny. You've surrounded quite a story around the subject matter. I applaud you on your creative, clever, and well thought out way you've wrote this. The ending was the icing on the cake. I enjoyed this! Great job and well done!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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This is really good and very funny. You've surrounded quite a story around the subject matter. I applaud you on your creative, clever, and well thought out way you've wrote this. The ending was the icing on the cake. I enjoyed this! Great job and well done!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Thank you very much, Jeffrey! I appreciate your warm and encouraging review.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is so well written that the reader feels like they are right there with the characters. This is written so true to life I'm trying to figure out if it really happened. It sounds like a very funny account with great amusing similes and metaphors, a story which was told to you by either Pete or Re-Pete. Very well done.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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This is so well written that the reader feels like they are right there with the characters. This is written so true to life I'm trying to figure out if it really happened. It sounds like a very funny account with great amusing similes and metaphors, a story which was told to you by either Pete or Re-Pete. Very well done.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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No, no, I'm afraid it's all from my vivid imagination. It's my only real chance to get out, you see...
Thank you for the fantastic review!
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This is so good. It is so believable which shows what a good writer you are.
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What a really sweet review this is. Thank you. It made my night.
Comment from kiwijenny
Woo woe and it's kinda sick.. they need to start a bar of their own called
'dis-ease yourself in here.'
Yikes ...good descriptions... and I'm glad they got bust-ed but not in the way they planned
God bless
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Woo woe and it's kinda sick.. they need to start a bar of their own called
'dis-ease yourself in here.'
Yikes ...good descriptions... and I'm glad they got bust-ed but not in the way they planned
God bless
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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HAHAHAHA. Good one, Kiwijenny!
Thanks for the cute review! You always bring me a smile. xo
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Lol
Comment from Mark Valentine
I love the attention to detail in this - popcorn crushing under boots - museum quality juke box - you paint a great picture of a small town bar, of the unique Wedding-Crashers-like relationship between father and son, and mostly, of the eternal quest to "hook-up" evidenced by such cheesy lines as "I'll take a top off" (nice).
It's obvious that a lot of care went into crafting this great story - good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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I love the attention to detail in this - popcorn crushing under boots - museum quality juke box - you paint a great picture of a small town bar, of the unique Wedding-Crashers-like relationship between father and son, and mostly, of the eternal quest to "hook-up" evidenced by such cheesy lines as "I'll take a top off" (nice).
It's obvious that a lot of care went into crafting this great story - good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Thanks. I had a fun, vicarious thrill the whole time I wrote it. I appreciate your review.
Comment from dmt1967
This story made me smile and serves him right. I didn't see that coming, though. I thought she might be an undercover cop posing as a prostitute or something. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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This story made me smile and serves him right. I didn't see that coming, though. I thought she might be an undercover cop posing as a prostitute or something. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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The only real 'tell' was that she was the only woman in there drinking a non-alcoholic beer - and it was for the same company-rule reason as Pete and Re-Pete.
I appreciate your review and also your well-wishes for the contest.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Oh, and things were going so well and you had to get him fired. I liked it and I didn't see a thing out of place. You did an excellent job and good luck in the contest. Shirley
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Oh, and things were going so well and you had to get him fired. I liked it and I didn't see a thing out of place. You did an excellent job and good luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Hahaha. He should have known something was amiss with the only other person besides him and his father who was drinking non-alcoholic beer! (Ah, youth!)
Thanks for you nice review, Shirley.
Comment from LIJ Red
What goes around (the shaft) comes around. Been around too many guys like those, and almost enough such barflies....looks good for the prompt and reads well.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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What goes around (the shaft) comes around. Been around too many guys like those, and almost enough such barflies....looks good for the prompt and reads well.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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thank you
Comment from LaFrance
They say you can't mix business with pleasure, It looks like the re-pete learn a valuable lesson. Luckily the dad did not meet the some fate. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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They say you can't mix business with pleasure, It looks like the re-pete learn a valuable lesson. Luckily the dad did not meet the some fate. Best of luck.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Yep. Sometimes you just live right! Thanks for the review, LaFrance. xo
Comment from Rhonda Skinner
This is very well written. I'm thinking the bar is a real-life setting even if the rest of the story is fiction. Good luck in the contest, mystery writer.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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This is very well written. I'm thinking the bar is a real-life setting even if the rest of the story is fiction. Good luck in the contest, mystery writer.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Nope! It's from my imagination, too!! But that is the ultimate compliment, so thanks!
