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A love poem to my departed wife.44 total reviews
Comment from Fleedleflump
Fun us of archaic language helps carry this along. I love the straightforward delivery - this is a love poem, and wants that to be as clear as day. I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
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Fun us of archaic language helps carry this along. I love the straightforward delivery - this is a love poem, and wants that to be as clear as day. I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
Comment from Paul McFarland
A lovely tribute to your departed wife. It is always nice to find a poem that reminds me of the old values. They probably exist today but not as much as they use to.
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A lovely tribute to your departed wife. It is always nice to find a poem that reminds me of the old values. They probably exist today but not as much as they use to.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful love poem for a lovely person, one whom you loved with all your heart. Sounds like you had many happy years together. Thanks for sharing.
Wendy
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A beautiful love poem for a lovely person, one whom you loved with all your heart. Sounds like you had many happy years together. Thanks for sharing.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
Comment from Lilly Flowers
This is such a lovely and heartfelt poem. I'm sure your wife is looking down from heaven and smiling. The picture you posted is wonderful. I can tell just by looking at her face that she was a wonderful woman. May her memory be a blessing. Regards, Lilly
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This is such a lovely and heartfelt poem. I'm sure your wife is looking down from heaven and smiling. The picture you posted is wonderful. I can tell just by looking at her face that she was a wonderful woman. May her memory be a blessing. Regards, Lilly
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
Comment from harmony13
This is a beautiful poem! The author's words are filled with love, caring
and excitement. I like how this author ended this poem with the words of
the last line. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is lovely
and compliments these words well.
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This is a beautiful poem! The author's words are filled with love, caring
and excitement. I like how this author ended this poem with the words of
the last line. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is lovely
and compliments these words well.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from Aussie
I liked the way you used old English in your poem. "Greater love hath no man that he lay down his life for a friend." She is still around you, waiting for you to come home. Patience is all that is required. Pity we can't leave earth together. K XX
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I liked the way you used old English in your poem. "Greater love hath no man that he lay down his life for a friend." She is still around you, waiting for you to come home. Patience is all that is required. Pity we can't leave earth together. K XX
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from Anne Johnston
What a beautiful love poem, I am sure your wife appreciated that you shared your thoughts with her in this form. I like how you have used the old English word "thee".
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What a beautiful love poem, I am sure your wife appreciated that you shared your thoughts with her in this form. I like how you have used the old English word "thee".
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This ultra-concise poem is sincere, romantic, and deelpy expressive. Your love for her and your sweet memories of her shine through. Those memories are wonderful, aren't they?
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This ultra-concise poem is sincere, romantic, and deelpy expressive. Your love for her and your sweet memories of her shine through. Those memories are wonderful, aren't they?
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I love the repeated use of "thee" in this writing - it gives it a romantic, poetic feel. I feel for your loss, I hope your words help to mend your broken heart.
Best wishes,
Pam
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I love the repeated use of "thee" in this writing - it gives it a romantic, poetic feel. I feel for your loss, I hope your words help to mend your broken heart.
Best wishes,
Pam
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a beautiful poetic tribute to a beautiful lady. Your poem flows smoothly and is easy to read. I'm sure that during her lifetime your wife enjoyed your expressions of love for her. As you read and write poetry about her, you keep her memory alive. I wish you the best in the contest.
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This is a beautiful poetic tribute to a beautiful lady. Your poem flows smoothly and is easy to read. I'm sure that during her lifetime your wife enjoyed your expressions of love for her. As you read and write poetry about her, you keep her memory alive. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
