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A love poem to my departed wife.44 total reviews
Comment from Spitfire
She's a beautiful woman. Looks a lot like Princess Diane. It's interesting and different that you use the old fashioned pronouns 'thee' and 'thou'. Nice use of parallel structure too.
Good luck in the contest.
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She's a beautiful woman. Looks a lot like Princess Diane. It's interesting and different that you use the old fashioned pronouns 'thee' and 'thou'. Nice use of parallel structure too.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from royowen
It's a wonderful thing to have a good woman by one's side, and I have the best, as yours was to you Willie, Elaine is to me. This is so well written, tenderly so, it's a beautifully written post friend Willie, well done, blessings Roy
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It's a wonderful thing to have a good woman by one's side, and I have the best, as yours was to you Willie, Elaine is to me. This is so well written, tenderly so, it's a beautifully written post friend Willie, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is such a wonderful tribute to your beloved wife Willie and I loved the old English style you used to add a little class to your wonderful poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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This is such a wonderful tribute to your beloved wife Willie and I loved the old English style you used to add a little class to your wonderful poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm so sorry for your loss, Willie, but I'm sure she is still very close watching over you. Your beautiful, very romantic poem, is so lovely. I can understand you being rewarded, and I'm sure she did many things for you and you rewarded her. I love the old form you've used, it works so well. I very much enjoyed reading it. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
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I'm so sorry for your loss, Willie, but I'm sure she is still very close watching over you. Your beautiful, very romantic poem, is so lovely. I can understand you being rewarded, and I'm sure she did many things for you and you rewarded her. I love the old form you've used, it works so well. I very much enjoyed reading it. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from Teri7
This is a very lovely and heartfelt poem you have penned about your beautiful wife. She was a very pretty lady from the picture you used. Thank you for sharing this with us. I bet she was a very sweet lady too! Blessings, Teri
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This is a very lovely and heartfelt poem you have penned about your beautiful wife. She was a very pretty lady from the picture you used. Thank you for sharing this with us. I bet she was a very sweet lady too! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
The older (biblical) language form works in this poem. The rhyme scheme is on point. The message clearly expresses your love. I know she appreciated the many verses you penned for her. If the contest is not over good luck in it.
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The older (biblical) language form works in this poem. The rhyme scheme is on point. The message clearly expresses your love. I know she appreciated the many verses you penned for her. If the contest is not over good luck in it.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from GWHARGIS
Awe. This was so tender and sweet. The over all rhythm and meter were good. The feeling behind this was rich and heartfelt. Thats the best kind of poem.
Gretchen
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Awe. This was so tender and sweet. The over all rhythm and meter were good. The feeling behind this was rich and heartfelt. Thats the best kind of poem.
Gretchen
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from nancy_e_davis
She is indeed a lovely lady. You said, " I was always greatly
rewarded with her love." Well it is apparent she was greatly
rewarded with yours as well, Willie. Nancy:)
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She is indeed a lovely lady. You said, " I was always greatly
rewarded with her love." Well it is apparent she was greatly
rewarded with yours as well, Willie. Nancy:)
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your love poem for your beautiful
wife, Willie. I enjoyed reading it. I liked the rhyme scheme,
the smooth flow, and the message. Your wife's picture's awesome.
I believe she saw this.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
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You did a great job with your love poem for your beautiful
wife, Willie. I enjoyed reading it. I liked the rhyme scheme,
the smooth flow, and the message. Your wife's picture's awesome.
I believe she saw this.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is interesting and entertaining to read. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is interesting and entertaining to read. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
