Ten
A love poem to my departed wife.44 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written love poem. It has a great flow and rhyme. Beautiful photo to compliment your words. Thee filleth the air with sweet perfume,The moment thy presence enters the room.
Thee giveth me pleasure to no end.To me thou art a perfect "10".good luck in the contest.
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This is a beautifully written love poem. It has a great flow and rhyme. Beautiful photo to compliment your words. Thee filleth the air with sweet perfume,The moment thy presence enters the room.
Thee giveth me pleasure to no end.To me thou art a perfect "10".good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from nomi338
If she is still around to enjoy tributes like this, she is I am sure well pleased with the creativity she inspires in her man. Her man who has no shame in declaring his true feelings of joy and pride in the woman he married and declared as the love of his life. Very good.
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If she is still around to enjoy tributes like this, she is I am sure well pleased with the creativity she inspires in her man. Her man who has no shame in declaring his true feelings of joy and pride in the woman he married and declared as the love of his life. Very good.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from Janet Foor
This is a beautiful and loving poem. You have expressed your love for your wife in endearing words for her endearing qualities and more.
I enjoyed reading "Ten".
Blessings
Janet
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This is a beautiful and loving poem. You have expressed your love for your wife in endearing words for her endearing qualities and more.
I enjoyed reading "Ten".
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for sharing the photo, notes, and poem, Willie.
-You wrote a good love poem for her, and I think she
is still appreciating it, knowing how much you loved her.
-You do a good job showing her good qualities
that made her special to you.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Thanks for sharing the photo, notes, and poem, Willie.
-You wrote a good love poem for her, and I think she
is still appreciating it, knowing how much you loved her.
-You do a good job showing her good qualities
that made her special to you.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I began immediately after seeing her, writing poetry daily for three years of university. It excited her and girls from her floor who would gather to hear what I had to say, tittering perhaps, awed. Even today, forty plus years later, I write to her, for her, feeling much alike to those nights many eons ago. She remains delightsome.
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I began immediately after seeing her, writing poetry daily for three years of university. It excited her and girls from her floor who would gather to hear what I had to say, tittering perhaps, awed. Even today, forty plus years later, I write to her, for her, feeling much alike to those nights many eons ago. She remains delightsome.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from John Ciarmello
What a beautiful poem, Willie! It sounds like the years spent with her were fulfilling in every moment you shared. A wonderful tribute to eternal love. Much success with the contest. Best, JohnC.
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What a beautiful poem, Willie! It sounds like the years spent with her were fulfilling in every moment you shared. A wonderful tribute to eternal love. Much success with the contest. Best, JohnC.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
Willie,
This is quick, romantic and to the point. I like the use of 'thee', it makes it sound Shakespearean. It shows your deep and abiding love.
Good luck in the contest.
Good picture of her
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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Willie,
This is quick, romantic and to the point. I like the use of 'thee', it makes it sound Shakespearean. It shows your deep and abiding love.
Good luck in the contest.
Good picture of her
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from BethShelby
She looks like a very beautiful and loving woman. No wonder you wrote many love poem to her and this one so fomal you wrote it in the King James English. Of the call her a ten is a bit more recent but it is a excellent. I'll bet she loved it. What women wouldn't?
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She looks like a very beautiful and loving woman. No wonder you wrote many love poem to her and this one so fomal you wrote it in the King James English. Of the call her a ten is a bit more recent but it is a excellent. I'll bet she loved it. What women wouldn't?
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from Sally Law
Aw, this is so touching. How wonderful you love and esteem her above all others. Beautifully penned and illustrated with her photograph. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
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Aw, this is so touching. How wonderful you love and esteem her above all others. Beautifully penned and illustrated with her photograph. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
It's good to read such a poem about someone's spouse. I'm glad that a spouse would write such a lovely poem about his better half. Many times you don't find this kind of poem written unless they truly respect one another.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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It's good to read such a poem about someone's spouse. I'm glad that a spouse would write such a lovely poem about his better half. Many times you don't find this kind of poem written unless they truly respect one another.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review and stars.
