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Publicity Call.

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Comment from tempeste
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

One's disposition should count more than one's looks , right?

A lot of people focus on looks sadly but if you put money into the mix then even a not so good looking man can find women "interested" in them.

The man in the pic is not an Adonis yet because he has a car and money all of a sudden he is popular..."worthy of their time".

Better to be alone then letting yourself be taken for a ride. ..they are not interested in knowing him as a person but in having a good time with his money and if that means to fill him up with candy lies, they will. They are like voltures on a prey.

We live in a material world like Madonna pointed out..to many people base their happiness on waht money can buy them.

The guy in the pic is in part to blame too...there is a lid for every teapot ..so we should just be patient and the right person will come along...God knows what we need ..he wont leave us alone.

In only five words put forth many (sad) truths. Like always your words are thought provoking .



 Comment Written 03-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
    CIAO TEMPESTE: Thank you once more, my friend. Like I said before...you understand me. What you said is exactly the message that I sent. We need to be steadfast when we fall into various trials, Knowing that the testing of our faith produces patience. But let patience have it's perfect work, that we may be perfect and complete, lacking nothing. God bless you. CIAO, Tempeste. Your friend. :rhonnie69.
Comment from mkflood
Excellent
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Roflmao..yeah I'm sure the price tag is hefty..lol. thanks again rhonnie for selecting my work. It does work well with yours. Great job and thanks again... MKFlood

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
    HELLO MARK: Sorry I took so long getting back. Thank you for viewing and complementing on my work again. Yes...our work combined makes for a great read. We still have a lot more of it to do. I'm looking forward to that. Your partner, Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Mark D. R.
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rhonnie,

Funny McGee!

Cartoon made you use 'three' with 'free.' Otherwise, BOGO (buy one, get one) would have been another choice. Not quite sure from the cartoon who will be happier at the end of this school day. LOL

For these short ones, I like yiurvcentering, but I would consider increasing the font size a few points. Undoubtedly, there are FS members who may have a visual issue with the FS default size.

Mark

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
    HELLO MARK: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem. You are appreciated. Thanks for your suggestion. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I'm not sure what you mean exactly here Rhonnie? Maybe this guy is getting more than he bargained for and being robbed? I expect it is an April fools joke, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    HELLO DOLLY: You are right. This guy is getting more than he bargained for. I don't know that he's being robbed...but he's now paying for it. This is an April fool's joke. And he is the April fool. As usual...you are appreciated, Dolly. You know that. Your fan-friend, rhonnie69.