My sister Karma
Karma is what comes around goes around18 total reviews
Comment from mancub
I truly enjoyed this, you send your message with a strong sense and have a colorful and creative way of making it know what comes around goes around, The message you share is a good one as it reminds the people to be aware of their actions and words as one day they may come back to bite them. I know many can relate to this, you have done a great job, I would have like to see a ending with a bit more kick but it seemed to end just a bit off from the strength that you started with, with a tiny bit of flare at the end, this could be a 5, Thanks for sharing, Mancub
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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I truly enjoyed this, you send your message with a strong sense and have a colorful and creative way of making it know what comes around goes around, The message you share is a good one as it reminds the people to be aware of their actions and words as one day they may come back to bite them. I know many can relate to this, you have done a great job, I would have like to see a ending with a bit more kick but it seemed to end just a bit off from the strength that you started with, with a tiny bit of flare at the end, this could be a 5, Thanks for sharing, Mancub
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review and rating. I appreciate your input and critique. Thank you for reading.
Comment from patcelaw
I believe this as well. When I was young my mother told us girls that should we ever get pregnant before marriage she would disown us. I was raped when I was 18 and she tried to take my life two times when I refused to abort the child. You know what, God may have allowed this to happen to me, knowing it was not really a test for me, but more a test for my mother. And she failed the test initially but later she was better to me, but our relationship was always strained even to her death. I was a good daughter and never held the pain I experienced against her, but helped her many times and she even lived in my home several times.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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I believe this as well. When I was young my mother told us girls that should we ever get pregnant before marriage she would disown us. I was raped when I was 18 and she tried to take my life two times when I refused to abort the child. You know what, God may have allowed this to happen to me, knowing it was not really a test for me, but more a test for my mother. And she failed the test initially but later she was better to me, but our relationship was always strained even to her death. I was a good daughter and never held the pain I experienced against her, but helped her many times and she even lived in my home several times.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review and rating. I am sorry to hear this happened to you. I am also sorry that your mother didn't step up to the plate and be there for you. I have a lot of respect for someone who got pregnant from a rape and keeps the child. You being a good daughter is good karma for you. You time will come and Karma will reward you if it hasn't already. Thank you for reading.
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By making the decision I made those 62 years ago, God has blessed my life without measure. I was allowed to meet and marry a prince of a man and we had three lovely daughters. After giving my son up for adoption, God allowed me to find and meet him and his adopted mothers. We have a good relationship. My life story was made into a radio drama, If you should care to hear it just google Patricia Lawrence/free indeed and you will find two links to the story #'s 3325 and 3326.
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I will have to check that out.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi SL,
Absolutely! I completely agree. I believe we only truly keep what we give away, and that we are all connected. So hurting one person acutally hurts everyone; now extrapolate that to prejudice and discrimation against women (53% of world population) and racial / ethnic groups...then we end up with a hate-filled world. Sound timely?
Thanks for sharing your insightful work.
Jan
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Hi SL,
Absolutely! I completely agree. I believe we only truly keep what we give away, and that we are all connected. So hurting one person acutally hurts everyone; now extrapolate that to prejudice and discrimation against women (53% of world population) and racial / ethnic groups...then we end up with a hate-filled world. Sound timely?
Thanks for sharing your insightful work.
Jan
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review and rating. Yes it sounds timely. Wonderful extra input on Karma I love it. Thank you for reading.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I believe in Karma, we reap what we sow, and our past often catches up with us. I agree with your words, they are poignant, powerful and truthful, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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I believe in Karma, we reap what we sow, and our past often catches up with us. I agree with your words, they are poignant, powerful and truthful, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review and rating. Thank you your kinds words and encouragement of my post. Thank you for reading/
Comment from moongirlwriter
There are so many times when I say. . .that person is creating some very bad karma. I haven't personally seen it work but just have this feeling in the back of my head that it does. I hope so anyway. Delightful to read and think about it working. Not wishing anyone ill will, but a nice crash landing will work. :) Good luck with this piece.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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There are so many times when I say. . .that person is creating some very bad karma. I haven't personally seen it work but just have this feeling in the back of my head that it does. I hope so anyway. Delightful to read and think about it working. Not wishing anyone ill will, but a nice crash landing will work. :) Good luck with this piece.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review and rating. I always think a crash landing is excellent Karma for someone who just does wrong on everyone they come in contact with. Thank you for reading.
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Comment from aryr
I really liked this Sandra, both the picture and the poem. I do believe your words have given everyone fair warning in regards to Karma. And yes it does come back to bite one in the butt. Very enjoyable, very realistic and extremely important.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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I really liked this Sandra, both the picture and the poem. I do believe your words have given everyone fair warning in regards to Karma. And yes it does come back to bite one in the butt. Very enjoyable, very realistic and extremely important.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review and rating. Thank you for your wonderful words about my post of Sister Karma. Thank you for reading.
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You are so welcome Sandra
Comment from rspoet
Hello SL,
Much is determined by the past behavior.
It influences nearly everything that goes forward.
Your poem is an excellent insight to the nature of that relationship.
Of course, there is also good karma
that also comes around to help and sooth.
Excellent art work to match
Well done
RS
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Hello SL,
Much is determined by the past behavior.
It influences nearly everything that goes forward.
Your poem is an excellent insight to the nature of that relationship.
Of course, there is also good karma
that also comes around to help and sooth.
Excellent art work to match
Well done
RS
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review and rating. Yes there is good and bad karma. Thank you for saying my poem is an excellent insight. Thank you for reading.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good write, SL Morrical. And so true. Karma is tough and will come back on you when you least expect it or need it. Good job of writing and keep up the good work.
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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This was a good write, SL Morrical. And so true. Karma is tough and will come back on you when you least expect it or need it. Good job of writing and keep up the good work.
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review and rating. Thank you for the encouragement in writing. Thank you for reading.
