War
Why did I have to lose him?4 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Why indeed! There are so many answers that can be given but none of them can ever justify the loss of a loved one. So many left behind to grieve with unsolved questions. A very poignant poem.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Why indeed! There are so many answers that can be given but none of them can ever justify the loss of a loved one. So many left behind to grieve with unsolved questions. A very poignant poem.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read. And an unanswerable question. One small nit: I'd think about the last line. It almost reads like you're questioning why you're crying instead of why did he have to die. But that's just my thought.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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This was a good read. And an unanswerable question. One small nit: I'd think about the last line. It almost reads like you're questioning why you're crying instead of why did he have to die. But that's just my thought.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Many thanks chas.
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a well-written poem about the life of a military hero, all the lost soldiers. It's well-written, has great word choice which gets your point across nicely. It has a nice even flow and rhymes very well. Good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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This is a well-written poem about the life of a military hero, all the lost soldiers. It's well-written, has great word choice which gets your point across nicely. It has a nice even flow and rhymes very well. Good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Many thanks for the great review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, War, brings with it the noble and the hurtful aspects of defending the nation in foreign lands. We honor their sacrifice, but wish the hadn't had to do so.
I found this: No medals (sought)
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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This poem, War, brings with it the noble and the hurtful aspects of defending the nation in foreign lands. We honor their sacrifice, but wish the hadn't had to do so.
I found this: No medals (sought)
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much Bill for the review and for spotting the mistake. I've fixed it.
