A Mother's Prayer of Gratitude
The sanctity of noticing each precious accomplishment.47 total reviews
Comment from Bichon
A very sweet poem. I am so glad your little kid makes you feel this way, so pleasant. This is definitely a poem that many sweet parents will relate to.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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A very sweet poem. I am so glad your little kid makes you feel this way, so pleasant. This is definitely a poem that many sweet parents will relate to.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Bichon, for this sweet review.
Comment from mancub
This is a very sweet and heartfelt piece, excellent word choice and you have a powerful delivery of a warm loving message, your creativity stands out and your heart as well, I love the picture as well, too cute! This is well put together, good luck and thank you for sharing, Mancub
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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This is a very sweet and heartfelt piece, excellent word choice and you have a powerful delivery of a warm loving message, your creativity stands out and your heart as well, I love the picture as well, too cute! This is well put together, good luck and thank you for sharing, Mancub
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Wow, Mancub! Thank you for this warm and encouraging review.
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You are welcome! Good Luck!
Comment from Tina Crute
Beautiful! It doesn't take many words for you to say a lot. We can all relate to that feeling of gratefulness for someone wonderful in our lives. Thank you for sharing a part of yourself with us. Love the sentiment!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Beautiful! It doesn't take many words for you to say a lot. We can all relate to that feeling of gratefulness for someone wonderful in our lives. Thank you for sharing a part of yourself with us. Love the sentiment!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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What a beautiful, encouraging, and heartwarming review this is, Tina. Thank you very much. You've made my day.
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
All of your syllables are well-used in this 5-7-5 that expresses the
boost of faith in God that we experience when He allows us to see
the wonders of His most precious creation!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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All of your syllables are well-used in this 5-7-5 that expresses the
boost of faith in God that we experience when He allows us to see
the wonders of His most precious creation!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thanks, Janice. I appreciate this review very much.
Comment from Ross E Silke
This is very beautifully worded and captivating! Much much emotion is felt in this one! A beautiful genuine and adorable picture to accompany!--It's a perfect fit! This speaks of a parent's love for their child that is absolutely genuine and so much for their growth and happiness in feeling God's presence with their child. Truly a poem written about the love for the child and how sincere the parents are. Great word choices!! I might recommend increasing the font size and bolding it for a stronger presentation. The picture is a great hook! Beautiful all around! Much enjoyed this thought today.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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This is very beautifully worded and captivating! Much much emotion is felt in this one! A beautiful genuine and adorable picture to accompany!--It's a perfect fit! This speaks of a parent's love for their child that is absolutely genuine and so much for their growth and happiness in feeling God's presence with their child. Truly a poem written about the love for the child and how sincere the parents are. Great word choices!! I might recommend increasing the font size and bolding it for a stronger presentation. The picture is a great hook! Beautiful all around! Much enjoyed this thought today.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Ross, for your suggestions as well as this encouraging review.
Comment from Mark D. R.
A very touched and inspiring verse for this faith writing prompt.
Your illustrated child gives us hope for his future, whether he becomes the next Lionel Hampton or not. LOL
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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A very touched and inspiring verse for this faith writing prompt.
Your illustrated child gives us hope for his future, whether he becomes the next Lionel Hampton or not. LOL
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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That is the essence of it, Mark D.R. - our hopes and aspirations for the children we love. Thank you for this sweet review.
Comment from Miss Sherry
A glorious poem about seeing every smallest thing as well as the large. When we see the miracle of achievement our hearts burst with joy. When my 15-month-old son watched Sesame Street one day and read a word on his own, I was so ecstatic I told everyone. Joy is in noticing everything.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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A glorious poem about seeing every smallest thing as well as the large. When we see the miracle of achievement our hearts burst with joy. When my 15-month-old son watched Sesame Street one day and read a word on his own, I was so ecstatic I told everyone. Joy is in noticing everything.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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That is EXACTLY right, Miss Sherry. That is a PERFECT description of joy.
Thank you for this heartwarming review.
Comment from Ms. Snyder
I felt exactly the same way. Up until I had a child ( a son ) I didn't feel God with me. I felt him every time my son would explore or be determined to finish something. Each time he did something spectacular in sports. It was a present that I never could have imagined receiving. This 5-7-5 is a beautiful depiction of exactly what I felt about my now 25-year-old son at the ages when he would so many years ago amaze me in small and wondrous ways. Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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I felt exactly the same way. Up until I had a child ( a son ) I didn't feel God with me. I felt him every time my son would explore or be determined to finish something. Each time he did something spectacular in sports. It was a present that I never could have imagined receiving. This 5-7-5 is a beautiful depiction of exactly what I felt about my now 25-year-old son at the ages when he would so many years ago amaze me in small and wondrous ways. Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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And it keeps getting better, the older they get. That's the real gift. Thanks for this absolutely lovely review, Fonda, and the delicious vignette about your son.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your words pair nicely with your art choice. Good job on the syllable count per line. Your few words/syllables are required speak volumes about faith. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your words pair nicely with your art choice. Good job on the syllable count per line. Your few words/syllables are required speak volumes about faith. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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This was such a sweet review, Jannypan. Thank you.
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A nice, colorful and complimentary artwork for your poem. A good 5-7-5 syllable count. In three lines you've made a strong Christian statement. Having two children I identified with your work.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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A nice, colorful and complimentary artwork for your poem. A good 5-7-5 syllable count. In three lines you've made a strong Christian statement. Having two children I identified with your work.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Lance. These are very warming words to read.
