Forever in my Heart
a two line love poem3 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Beautifully said (and illustrated) and an important message that we all need to repeat to loved ones who live far away or to ourselves if our loved ones have left this earth. You've done a perfect job with this. Good luck to you in the contest. xo
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Beautifully said (and illustrated) and an important message that we all need to repeat to loved ones who live far away or to ourselves if our loved ones have left this earth. You've done a perfect job with this. Good luck to you in the contest. xo
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Thank you ever so much! I so greatly appreciate the rating, the review and the good luck wishes! xo back at you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I feel these words because they could apply to me, I am in this situation and it is hard being away from someone you care about, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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I feel these words because they could apply to me, I am in this situation and it is hard being away from someone you care about, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much! I really do appreciate the rating and your review!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
Well, I've read a few entries into this contest now, and though I do understand these sentiments really, really well, and have felt them myself often, I have to be honest and tell you -- (sorry!!!!) -- that I don't think they are too original. (sorry, sorry!)
I might want to try to find a new way to say it or an unusual wording or something that would offer a special spark. But that is ABSOLUTELY one person's opinion only. And we all know what opinions are worth. You are welcome to toss my thoughts in the nearest garbage can -- and probably should. And please know I am not trying to offend, for sure. I hope you win! So, to that end, I'm being honest.
Since this IS a subjective opinion, I would never lower the rating.
Good luck!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Dear Mystery Poet,
Well, I've read a few entries into this contest now, and though I do understand these sentiments really, really well, and have felt them myself often, I have to be honest and tell you -- (sorry!!!!) -- that I don't think they are too original. (sorry, sorry!)
I might want to try to find a new way to say it or an unusual wording or something that would offer a special spark. But that is ABSOLUTELY one person's opinion only. And we all know what opinions are worth. You are welcome to toss my thoughts in the nearest garbage can -- and probably should. And please know I am not trying to offend, for sure. I hope you win! So, to that end, I'm being honest.
Since this IS a subjective opinion, I would never lower the rating.
Good luck!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Appreciate the rating and comments>
