Lasting Love
Thankful for years of loving marriage3 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
There is a lifetime portrayed in this simple two line poem. Starting with the title, description and then moving down into the depth of the poem, I see a long bond of marital love. 'November face' was brilliant. It hints to me of age ... the loved one looked upon being in his/her late fall or early winter of life. I also love how the 'sunlight tiptoes,' so as not to wake the sleeping form.
Beautifully composed!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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There is a lifetime portrayed in this simple two line poem. Starting with the title, description and then moving down into the depth of the poem, I see a long bond of marital love. 'November face' was brilliant. It hints to me of age ... the loved one looked upon being in his/her late fall or early winter of life. I also love how the 'sunlight tiptoes,' so as not to wake the sleeping form.
Beautifully composed!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much for the read and the beautiful review. You nail November right on the proverbial head.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
I like this a lot. I especially like the insertion of the word November, as if you love your mate each month and take the time to say so. That really seems like an important part of this poem. True love means appreciating your loved one through allll the seasons. I like that!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Dear Mystery Poet,
I like this a lot. I especially like the insertion of the word November, as if you love your mate each month and take the time to say so. That really seems like an important part of this poem. True love means appreciating your loved one through allll the seasons. I like that!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Hi,
Thank you for your read and comments. November was intended to refer to our age. But, I also like your read. Never can tell what other people will see in a poem.
Comment from Maria Millsaps
What a nice and simple way to express lasting love. I really like the way you animated the sunlight tiptoeing. It gives the poem a tenderness and gentleness.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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What a nice and simple way to express lasting love. I really like the way you animated the sunlight tiptoeing. It gives the poem a tenderness and gentleness.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your read and your kind view of the poem.
