Warning
Supreme Passion.58 total reviews
Comment from livelylinda
If you didn't have the capital "M" and the colon and the period, it would be perfect. When writing poety, it is not dictated that you need to use the same punctuation, etc. as one uses when writing a sentence. The break in each line is enough punctuation. Just my opinion. livelylinda
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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If you didn't have the capital "M" and the colon and the period, it would be perfect. When writing poety, it is not dictated that you need to use the same punctuation, etc. as one uses when writing a sentence. The break in each line is enough punctuation. Just my opinion. livelylinda
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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thanks linda (see what I did there no punctuation or capitals)
Comment from phil nelson
This was most enjoyable and clever. There is certainly nothing to be critical of and I hope that you do very well in the contest.
All the Best
Phil
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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This was most enjoyable and clever. There is certainly nothing to be critical of and I hope that you do very well in the contest.
All the Best
Phil
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Phil! My red hair and I just love this review!!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Warning, has the proper syllable set up and promotes the idea that a scarlet-domed woman, I assume, has tresses for the stresses that will test each suitor.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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This 3-5-3, Warning, has the proper syllable set up and promotes the idea that a scarlet-domed woman, I assume, has tresses for the stresses that will test each suitor.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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HAHAHAHA!! How poetically put this is, Bill!! I couldn't love it more. Thanks for the delightful review.
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author!!! I'm liking it! You're giving me ideas!!! You know, I was going to do my hair today, the regular get all the gray out of my hair brown... as light as I can find brown so It doesn't look so white when it comes back in... (never works). Maybe I'll go back and get some auburn though instead... I've gone that way before and it looks nice... that could kick up some interest around here... ;)
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Hello Author!!! I'm liking it! You're giving me ideas!!! You know, I was going to do my hair today, the regular get all the gray out of my hair brown... as light as I can find brown so It doesn't look so white when it comes back in... (never works). Maybe I'll go back and get some auburn though instead... I've gone that way before and it looks nice... that could kick up some interest around here... ;)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Judging from the reviews I've received, I think you're right, Susan! (Just beware of TPAC. He told me to 'flame on' in a way that I do not believe was an encouragement! lol!)
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I'm not sure if I ought to say this to you but I'm going to take my chances because you have such a fun sense of humor... Well... I'm not terrible familiar with TPAC, maybe he had a Bible in one hand? 😉 😂
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hahahaha. Yep! You guessed it!!
Comment from TPAC
Really, assuming yourself a living Torch, enlightening the world with such stated delights as this one presented, given straight off the shoulder view. Flame on, in my given thought about this write.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Really, assuming yourself a living Torch, enlightening the world with such stated delights as this one presented, given straight off the shoulder view. Flame on, in my given thought about this write.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Hahaha. Now, TPAC, surely you know that I wrote this for a contest, for the sole and exclusive goal of standing out from the pack. Please don't think so ill of me! : )
Comment from Reese Turner
That's what I'm talkin' about! Nice job of fitting a big message into a small space. I'll think about it all day. In fact, I told my wife at our 35th that I planned to leave her; as soon as I found a red-head who owned a liquor store. No luck yet and she' been helping me look. We are now at 42...
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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That's what I'm talkin' about! Nice job of fitting a big message into a small space. I'll think about it all day. In fact, I told my wife at our 35th that I planned to leave her; as soon as I found a red-head who owned a liquor store. No luck yet and she' been helping me look. We are now at 42...
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! Omg. This is the funniest, most adorable review I think I've ever received!!! Thank you for starting my day out with the BEST laugh already, Reese.
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I like you. You laugh at my jokes. My wife stopped laughing years ago. Keep it red and rowdy!
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Well, but in all fairness, Reese, it's hard to laugh at the same jokes for 42 consecutive years. (If it's any consolation I've found that once students of mine get into double-digits, I'm not funny anymore, either.)
Comment from Lance S. Loria
My father always preferred redheads and my blonde mom dyed her hair red from as early as I recall. Good contest entry. No edits or adjustments needed.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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My father always preferred redheads and my blonde mom dyed her hair red from as early as I recall. Good contest entry. No edits or adjustments needed.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Lance! And I loved reading the vignette about your own personal redhead, too!! Truly delightful review.
Comment from poetwatch
I love what you do with your hair. Red is the color of hot and sweet desire, a change in climax and it sparks a fire. This is a good entry for the 3-5-3 contest. thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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I love what you do with your hair. Red is the color of hot and sweet desire, a change in climax and it sparks a fire. This is a good entry for the 3-5-3 contest. thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Why, poetwatch! You naughty creature, you!! : )
My red hair and I love this review!!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oooooo.... promises, promises! :) ;) Best be careful with such inflammatory language! :) :) LOL! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Oooooo.... promises, promises! :) ;) Best be careful with such inflammatory language! :) :) LOL! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Ohhhh. I see what you did there: inflammatory - molten hot picture. You have no shame, Yvette.
Thanks for the adorable review. I loved it.
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a very good response to the prompt, author. Red heads most certainly do seem to be more exotic than the more typical brunettes or blondes.
Great job and good luck to you in the voting booth.
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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This is a very good response to the prompt, author. Red heads most certainly do seem to be more exotic than the more typical brunettes or blondes.
Great job and good luck to you in the voting booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Probably just because there's fewer of us, Gloria! But I appreciate your kind words and lovely review. Thank you very much.
