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Supreme Passion.

58 total reviews 
Comment from Heather Knight
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This made me laugh. So redheads are dangerous then... Or just passionate?
I love red hair and I use henna to make my brown hair look that colour.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    We are passionate souls -though in adequate hands, it's probably deemed dangerous.

    I like the color of your hair in your profile picture. It's a lovely shade of red.

    Thank you for the fun review, Maria.
reply by Heather Knight on 16-Apr-2019
    Thanks:)
Comment from LIJ Red
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I was irritated when people would say, you have the reddish hair I ever saw. Then it turned gray and fell out....count your blessings...what's the difference in a 3/5/3 and a lune, I wonder...excellent post.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Well, hopefully mine won't do THAT, LlJRed!!

    Your spunky red-headed spirit still shines through, though; not to worry.

    Thank you for the fun review.
Comment from tfawcus
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Some like it hot! Now you have me trying to guess which Fanstorians are redheads! LOL
I'm not usually a great fan of these short forms, but this one is toasty.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Well, you've just warmed ME with this wonderful review, tfawcus! I couldn't appreciate it more. Stay tuned for The Big Reveal, I guess!!
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
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Oh Wow ... I sincerely hope the voters will think so! :-)

You exude super confidence, Contestant...way to go!

I don't think the artwork does your entry justice though...just my opinion.

Best wishes in the contest!


 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    I put in "redheads" and came up with SUCH worse artwork. So I decided this would do because it reminded me of molten lava that was almost forming the shape of a person. (Or, at least in my vivid imagination it was...)

    Thanks for this wonderful review.
reply by Sandra Elizabeth Williams on 16-Apr-2019
    OK, I get you. Best wishes!
    You are very welcome too.
Comment from AprilViolet
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I have poems like these. You really have to choose your words carefully because you only get a few. Love the title and picture. Everything works perfectly together!

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    I appreciate this very much, AprilViolet. This was a terrific review to read.
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Contest Author,

Ha ha ha! This is a great poem about your passionate nature, and a super contest entry. Nothing here for me to suggest you consider reworking. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan :-)

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Well, a red-hot thank you for this nice review, Jan!
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Wow, this is very hot. Red-hairs have that spark, which excites most men and likely make women envious.

With so few words, it is hard to find any fault in your 3-5-3. Your last line is the winner!

I would prefer a larger font size (consider bolding the text to increase the contrast between your text color and its background color). It is your poetic choice to use italics for this particular verse. However, there are likely a number of FS members with some visual acuity issues that will not 'see' your verse in a good light.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Hmmm. I appreciate this very much, Mark. Thank you for that head's up.

    And I also appreciate your noticing that red-heads have a hot spark!
Comment from Bicpen
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Excellent. It must be true and with the diagnosis of red you are bound to embrace the achievement of providence directed by God's red right hand leading to the passionate outpouring of chemistry that boils the blood. Overheating in Fahrenheit with a pulse to match lays the body intoxicated with that brutal affections.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    You betcha, Bicpen! Thanks for the review.
Comment from kiwijenny
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Cool poem...actually hot

Mine would read...
My grey hair
is your guarantee
I grizzle

Laugh out loud ... my blue hair
is your guarantee
I baffle

My green hair
Is your guarantee
I envy

It's such a great poem
God bless

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH. Omg - I am bent over laughing here, kiwijenny!! I feel honored to have been your muse today.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. I like the presentation--the art is a great pairing with your words, the color scheme works well, the well-chosen words are strong, and the rules were followed. Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much, Jan! I appreciate this helpful feedback very much and the well-wishes, too.