Comment from Raul1

Excellent

Red hair from your poem definitely sizzles. I was thinking of a girl in this poem. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! I like it. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019

Then you are right on target, Raul1!!
Thank you for this delightful review!

reply by Raul1 on 15-Apr-2019

You're welcome.

Comment from Tina Crute

Excellent

This is so cute! I really like your sense of humor, and the picture is perfect, with the background of red also. A perfect piece of creativity! I think the third line is 4 syllables? You could put ...of a sizzler... or...I sizzle!, lol
No worries, I told you because I don't want you to be disqualified. I like this entry!

Blessings!

Tina

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019

You know, I think you're right about that!!! GOOD CATCH!!! I owe you, big time, Tina!!! Thank you!!

And thanks for the terrific review, too!

reply by Tina Crute on 15-Apr-2019

Oh whew! I am always afraid I am annoying, so I tiptoe around typos!
Yay! I am glad you got my review in time. I think you have a chance of placing in the contest. Fingers crossed...:)

reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019

Well, NOW I do, thanks to you!!

reply by Tina Crute on 15-Apr-2019

You are too kind. I am anxious to see how that contest turns out:)

reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019

Me, too!!

reply by Tina Crute on 15-Apr-2019

:):)

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Wonderful entry for the contest. It's TRUE that red haired women have fiery tempers..perhaps that includes passion as well. Best of luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019

Yep, it helps make the bad temper part tolerable.

Thanks for your well-wishes for the contest.

reply by Boogienights on 15-Apr-2019

Comment from clsandau

Excellent

I like this 3-5-3 poem. It's actually pretty hot!! Love the comparison red hair and being a sizzler. I bet you are. We have a couple red heads in the family and yes, they are hot too!! Enjoyed your work and the syllable count is right on. Good Luck. Carol

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019

I feel, clsandau, that if I'm not, then it would kind of be false advertising!

Thanks for your terrific review!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is a really "hot" line 3/5/3 poetry entry in this contest. Yes, indeed I had red hair in my younger days, but I think my heated days are truly over now. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019

No, no, Roy; we redheads have to always keep sizzlin'!
Thanks for the fun review.

reply by royowen on 15-Apr-2019

Heh heh

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Play with fire and you will always get burned. The poet points that out very clearly. Good entry I find no fault. Best to you in the contest. It is good as they come here on Fan story.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019

That's right, Ben. Forewarned is forearmed!
Thanks for the terrific review.

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

My kingdom for a sixth star, but alas, I am without, mystery writer. I think the last line was so perfect to go with the red hair in this one. They really play off of each other. I absolutely love the confidence of your words in this piece. Good luck in the contest!

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019

Thank you. I take solace in the way all five of your current stars are red!
Great review, 24chas!

Comment from James Upshaw

Good

This poem is interesting. It painted a picture in my head of a person when I first read it, but then I went back and read your description. Very good!

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019

Thank you, James!!