Without my dream
A beautiful dream.35 total reviews
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO WILLIE: When our bodies go to sleep, our minds remain awake and alert.
Therefore we continue thinking. As we think...so are we. So where we think we've been when we sleep...there we have been. You had to leave your body home in bed. But, "YOU," were out there doing, "YOUR," thing. Go on. Travel, Buddy, Travel. Give me a, "High Five," where and when our paths cross. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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HELLO WILLIE: When our bodies go to sleep, our minds remain awake and alert.
Therefore we continue thinking. As we think...so are we. So where we think we've been when we sleep...there we have been. You had to leave your body home in bed. But, "YOU," were out there doing, "YOUR," thing. Go on. Travel, Buddy, Travel. Give me a, "High Five," where and when our paths cross. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thank you for you excellent review. Glad you enjoyed the dream.
Comment from dragonpoet
What an adventurer you in your dreams. It sounds like a wonderful imagination which can be used to inspire a lot of writing. The rhythm
is smooth and quick, the rhyme unforced, and the images vivid.
Hope it does well in the contest. Keep writing
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reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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What an adventurer you in your dreams. It sounds like a wonderful imagination which can be used to inspire a lot of writing. The rhythm
is smooth and quick, the rhyme unforced, and the images vivid.
Hope it does well in the contest. Keep writing
dp
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thank you for you excellent review. Glad you enjoyed my dream
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You are most kindly welcome.
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Comment from Ogden
Yes, there's no denying sleep's debt to good dreams.
If people could program their own dreams, I'd bet "Without My Dreams" got credit for plenty of Willie P. Smith's perfect sleep.
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Yes, there's no denying sleep's debt to good dreams.
If people could program their own dreams, I'd bet "Without My Dreams" got credit for plenty of Willie P. Smith's perfect sleep.
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thank you for the five stars. Thank goodness, I have very few bad dreams. Some weird, but not bad.
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You're welcome, Willie.
Sleep well,
Don
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading your poem about dreams. It is so true, great dreams can put you in a great frame of mind for the day or not, as the case may be of course.
I particularly love daydreaming as you can do or go wherever you want.
Blessings Jen.
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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I really enjoyed reading your poem about dreams. It is so true, great dreams can put you in a great frame of mind for the day or not, as the case may be of course.
I particularly love daydreaming as you can do or go wherever you want.
Blessings Jen.
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thank you for the five stars. Glad you enjoyed the
dream.
Comment from Mastery
Very nice poetry, Willie. I love the images you created here within these lines. My favorites are these and the rainbow in particular: Good luck in the contest, my friend.
"I've gone beyond the limits
Of mortal men,
dangled my feet
Off the rainbow's bend."
Bless you, Bob
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Very nice poetry, Willie. I love the images you created here within these lines. My favorites are these and the rainbow in particular: Good luck in the contest, my friend.
"I've gone beyond the limits
Of mortal men,
dangled my feet
Off the rainbow's bend."
Bless you, Bob
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thanks Bob for your kind and encouraging words.
Comment from Suzie Q
Very well said. The photo you chose enhances your poem perfectly. Great rhyme and very descriptive. I especially liked " I've gone beyond the limits of mortal men, dangled my feet off the rainbow's bend" Well done!!
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Very well said. The photo you chose enhances your poem perfectly. Great rhyme and very descriptive. I especially liked " I've gone beyond the limits of mortal men, dangled my feet off the rainbow's bend" Well done!!
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your kind words, review and five stars.
Comment from jack silver
A very well written six four line stanza poem with some good use of ryhme. Contained everything the prompt said it should. Well worth the six stars I gave it.
Good luck
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Jack
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A very well written six four line stanza poem with some good use of ryhme. Contained everything the prompt said it should. Well worth the six stars I gave it.
Good luck
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Jack
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thank you Jack, you honor me. Glad you liked it.
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no problemo
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a stunning write in its dreamlike verse, by a versatile and prolific wordsmith - rhyming is smooth for the most part and easy in movement and complies fully with the prompt. Much luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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In my opinion, a stunning write in its dreamlike verse, by a versatile and prolific wordsmith - rhyming is smooth for the most part and easy in movement and complies fully with the prompt. Much luck in the contest...
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thanks for the nice review and five stars.
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You are very welcome, Willie, my pleasure...Eve
Comment from Earl Corp
I enjoyed this poem immensely. Your rhymes were great, it made sense, and it was entertaining. I wish I had dreams this vivid. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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I enjoyed this poem immensely. Your rhymes were great, it made sense, and it was entertaining. I wish I had dreams this vivid. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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I generally have good dreams, but I have PTSD and a bad one sneaks in sometimes. I really appreciate the six stats.
Comment from lyenochka
It's a beautiful dream! I loved it especially the "changing of the guard between the moon and sun." You may call it fantasy but you bring in real life places, too.
"The milky way run. " (Milky Way)
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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It's a beautiful dream! I loved it especially the "changing of the guard between the moon and sun." You may call it fantasy but you bring in real life places, too.
"The milky way run. " (Milky Way)
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your review and five stars. They are appreciated
